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Palindrome Panic

A dog! A panic in a pagoda! A teen named Bob, a can of cream soda. With one eye shut, he shook and pulled the tab. The boob was too slow for Cain, choc’late lab. Cain: a maniac, the mad dog's head swelled; god’s dog saw the fizz, a rat he now smelled. He was gigantic, ergo, a ogre - level headed lab, well-trained at Kroger. As a new pup, he’d been schooled in shortcuts; Pagoda’s top spot for all kinds of mutts. “Go dog, go,” yelled Bob but lost his game plan; Dog radar kicked in, went straight for the can. Cain called to his friends, “it’s time, now I won.”. To idiot teen, he offered more fun. Wrestling, he tore at Bob’s rotator cuff; Evil deed done; lab had called the teen’s bluff. written: May 9, 2018 contest: Palindrome host: Joseph May

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Date: 5/27/2018 4:34:00 PM
Nicely done, Reason, congratulations on your Palindromes win... Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/27/2018 11:30:00 AM
A fun poem, Reason. Well done and congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 5/25/2018 7:50:00 AM
Bravo Reason I loved the palindromes you used, the first one was new to me and made me smile:-) :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2018 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Reason :)
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Date: 5/24/2018 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this fun palindrome. Well done.
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Date: 5/24/2018 8:53:00 AM
I enjoyed this panic in a pagoda Reason...Thanks for your entry and congrats on your win...
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Date: 5/24/2018 8:27:00 PM
I thank you, Joseph, first line set the stage and it developed from there... with admittedly several single words which are palindromes none the less.
Date: 5/12/2018 8:55:00 AM
Nicely done my friend...should place well...love and light...^WW^
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 5/12/2018 7:30:00 PM
I should hope that you were the host. Likes and tastes vary greatly from person to person. I enjoyed the write and appreciate your kind remarks, WW. Do wish that hosts would make comments regardless of the placement in their contests, perhaps some constructive criticism.
Date: 5/10/2018 9:14:00 AM
Dog a panic in a pagoda...very inventive...this challenge too much for me but you aced it!
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 5/11/2018 12:55:00 PM
not original with me, in many palindrome lists. But I did build the story line around it. Thanks for commenting.

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