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Pale Shelter

Your words and gestures reflect
no measure in your aloof eyes
to soothe my pallid insecurities.

I flounder thru perception errors
as you voice feel like grand favors.

I wish to know love's florid flush
in confidence blooms clearly rosy
not cloudy tenders floating doubts
where you repeatedly pose me.

Be it splendid or crumbling despair,
my need craves your heart's reveal.

Whether I reside cruelly splintered
or dwell in love's fueled contentment,
let me enter your genuine sector.





December 1, 2019
Pale Shelter
John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/10/2019 11:53:00 AM
Congrats. my friend Cay Cay - expressed and delivered only as a genuine poetess and friend knows how! Hugs Jenny.
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Date: 12/8/2019 6:25:00 AM
A stunning piece of poetic artwork, CC! The depth of introspection is amazing, quite soul elevating. Just a perfect storm of a poem, my dear friend. Love and best wishes for the holidays. Romantic Warrior
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Date: 12/7/2019 5:44:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Cay Cay
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Date: 12/7/2019 1:56:00 PM
Well done Cay Cay, I always enjoy your unique style and phrasing!
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Date: 12/2/2019 5:54:00 PM
Certainly a lot more imagery than mine has. Love it, Caycay. And I know how important a revealed heart is to you. I see you entered just in the nick of time like I did!
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Date: 12/2/2019 2:32:00 PM
Beautifully written and expressed CayCay :)
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Date: 12/1/2019 5:19:00 PM
Well done Cay Cay best of luck in this contest. Thanks for sharing this
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Date: 12/1/2019 4:19:00 PM
The eyes have it! Aloha! Rico
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