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Painting the Lighthouse

The night was dark with streaks of red. The air was heavy and full of dread. The waves of black tossed the boat. My brush went crazy with every stroke. But in the distance a lighthouse appeared. It's light a beacon for us who feared. That distant light of yellow and white would guide us through this stormy night. The brush took on a life of it's own as it painted the tall walls of stone. It formed huge rocks of grey and white as the light kept flashing through the night. Suddenly I looked at that black sky. Something was missing in my mind's eye. Yes, it was the moon, and with a few strokes it came out soon. Shaped like a cresent it gave me hope as I saw myself on this frail boat. The wind died down and I knew I wouldn't drown. I sat back and lit a cigarette. "I'll get one hundred dollars for this one I bet." "You see I'm an amateur," but my brush said, "Are you sure?" By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: June 6, 2017 "All Rights Reserved"

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Date: 12/16/2017 9:31:00 AM
I love this poem Carole...
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Carole Duet
Date: 12/17/2017 3:10:00 AM
I'm so glad you like it, Z. If you would like a pic of my painting let me know. Carole
Date: 11/24/2017 2:04:00 PM
Carole, I would buy that lighthouse scene. I have been in awa with the lighthouse for the longest time. I am drawn to them. If I could I would live in lighthouse all summer long.You paint a pretty picture with your words.Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/28/2017 9:36:00 AM
No Carole I am sorry i did not see it. i like paintings to.
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Carole Duet
Date: 11/26/2017 4:55:00 PM
Hi Darlene! Thank you so much for your kind words. Yes, I like lighthouses too. Did you see my painting before it was deleted? Carole Duet
Date: 10/19/2017 9:07:00 PM
I see you got a win with this one. It is one that I really liked way back when I first read it. Belated Congrats!
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Carole Duet
Date: 10/23/2017 10:04:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Did you see my painting?
Date: 7/7/2017 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carole, you have painted a wonderful picture with your words, well written. :))
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/7/2017 11:01:00 PM
Thank you, Roy. :)
Date: 7/6/2017 9:42:00 AM
What a wonderful tale of how you were painting came to be. A great painting and a great poem to go with it.
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/7/2017 11:02:00 PM
Hi Edward! Thank you so much. Glad you like it...and the painting! :) Carole Duet
Date: 7/2/2017 10:26:00 PM
very nice imagery, Carole, matching the painting. If the dripped paint is a water based paint you can just whip it off with soap and water it will not hurt the artwork if it is oils or acrylics . ~*
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/3/2017 11:16:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, and thanks also for the tip. I will definitely try that. :) Carole Duet
Date: 7/2/2017 12:02:00 PM
- I had to come back to see your picture - You have described your painting live and fair, Carol :) - Excellent, works of art and poems - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/2/2017 8:48:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. I try! Carole :)
Date: 7/2/2017 5:59:00 AM
One of my favorite subjects to paint is the lighthouse. I like the way you gave precedence to the storm in this one, and your color choices are perfect. Well done.
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/2/2017 8:50:00 PM
Thank you, Lin. I would love to see some of your paintings. Do you have any online? Carole :)
Date: 6/30/2017 8:41:00 PM
Whimsical and imaginative - loved it, Carole - congrats on your well-deserved placement!
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Carole Duet
Date: 7/1/2017 11:55:00 AM
Thanks, Greg. Glad you liked it. Carole Duet :)
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/30/2017 9:00:00 PM
Thank you, Greg. I really appreciate your very nice comment. :) Carole Duet
Date: 6/29/2017 10:45:00 PM
Wow...the closing line is just perfect. Quite a painting in a poem. Congrats on your win.
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/30/2017 9:03:00 PM
Thanks Afzal. I'm so glad you liked it. :) Carole Duet
Date: 6/29/2017 9:46:00 PM
Congrats Carol on a fine win!
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/29/2017 9:57:00 PM
Thank you, John. :D Carole Duet
Date: 6/29/2017 7:48:00 PM
Who can resist a lighthouse landscape and all the adventure it supplies! A speedy start propelled us into your world! Congrats on your win in my contest, Carole!
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/30/2017 9:10:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I appreciate it so much. :) Carole
Date: 6/27/2017 12:25:00 AM
Where is the painting?
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/27/2017 2:59:00 PM
The painting is there. I just uploaded it but it's hidden. You can see it on my timeline page on Facebook too.
Date: 6/26/2017 3:14:00 AM
What an enchanting description of your painting Carole. I think the painting must be very beautiful. ..Maria
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/26/2017 4:43:00 PM
I'm glad you liked "The Lighthouse", Maria, and soon I'm going to post the painting also. Thanks so much for your visits. Carole Duet
Date: 6/23/2017 8:08:00 PM
I finally got mine up and just loving this one of yours again, Captain Ahab!!!
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/24/2017 1:08:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Will check yours out now.
Date: 6/20/2017 2:08:00 PM
- Beautiful, you painted it perfectly Carole - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/24/2017 1:03:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. I'm going to add my painting to it after the contest is over.
Date: 6/19/2017 1:44:00 AM
A beautiful picture I can see in your words, Captain;) great piece of art, I should say:)
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/19/2017 8:16:00 PM
Thank you, Jo. So glad you liked it. After the contest is over I'm going to add a picture of my painting. Carole Duet
Date: 6/16/2017 9:46:00 PM
Wow, Carole. I LOVE your approach to this contest. This for ME is a WINNER.
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/17/2017 12:42:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I hope so. :) Carole
Date: 6/7/2017 8:11:00 PM
Words can paint an impressive picture. That's what you have done here.
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/7/2017 8:43:00 PM
Yes they can, Robert. Thank you very much. :) Carole Duet
Date: 6/7/2017 6:24:00 AM
Really very cool Capt. Carole I love the scene created by you words, the stormy sea now calm and the lighthouse. I just love lighthouses. There is something so enchanting to me about them which is how I find your poem as well. This was gorgeous.
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/7/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Chris. I will be adding my illustration soon: my painting
Date: 6/7/2017 3:42:00 AM
That last stanza is priceless, Carole, wonderfully written!
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/7/2017 12:15:00 PM
Thanks, Darren. So glad you liked it. (I will be adding my illustration soon: my painting...so come back later) Carole
Date: 6/6/2017 11:23:00 PM
Nicely done... you definately painted a picture there...
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/7/2017 12:17:00 PM
Come back later too because I will be adding the illustration soon: my painting
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/6/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thank you Joseph! I hope so.
Date: 6/6/2017 11:20:00 PM
Great stuff, Carole! Best of luck to you
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/7/2017 12:19:00 PM
I will take a new photo of my painting and add it to the poem sometime soon so you can see it again. :) Carole
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Carole Duet
Date: 6/6/2017 11:24:00 PM
Thank you, Budgie! ;)

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