Painting the Lighthouse

The night was dark with streaks of red. The air was heavy and full of dread. The waves of black tossed the boat. My brush went crazy with every stroke. But in the distance a lighthouse appeared. It's light a beacon for us who feared. That distant light of yellow and white would guide us through this stormy night. The brush took on a life of it's own as it painted the tall walls of stone. It formed huge rocks of grey and white as the light kept flashing through the night. Suddenly I looked at that black sky. Something was missing in my mind's eye. Yes, it was the moon, and with a few strokes it came out soon. Shaped like a cresent it gave me hope as I saw myself on this frail boat. The wind died down and I knew I wouldn't drown. I sat back and lit a cigarette. "I'll get one hundred dollars for this one I bet." "You see I'm an amateur," but my brush said, "Are you sure?" By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: June 6, 2017 "All Rights Reserved"
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December 16, 2017 at 9:31 AM
I love this poem Carole...
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December 17, 2017 at 3:10 AM
I'm so glad you like it, Z. If you would like a pic of my painting let me know. Carole
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November 24, 2017 at 2:04 PM
Carole, I would buy that lighthouse scene. I have been in awa with the lighthouse for the longest time. I am drawn to them. If I could I would live in lighthouse all summer long.You paint a pretty picture with your words.Have a nice day my friend.
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November 28, 2017 at 9:36 AM
No Carole I am sorry i did not see it. i like paintings to.
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November 26, 2017 at 4:55 PM
Hi Darlene! Thank you so much for your kind words. Yes, I like lighthouses too. Did you see my painting before it was deleted? Carole Duet
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October 19, 2017 at 9:07 PM
I see you got a win with this one. It is one that I really liked way back when I first read it. Belated Congrats!
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October 23, 2017 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Did you see my painting?
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July 7, 2017 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carole, you have painted a wonderful picture with your words, well written. :))
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July 7, 2017 at 11:01 PM
Thank you, Roy. :)
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July 6, 2017 at 9:42 AM
What a wonderful tale of how you were painting came to be. A great painting and a great poem to go with it.
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July 7, 2017 at 11:02 PM
Hi Edward! Thank you so much. Glad you like it...and the painting! :) Carole Duet
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July 2, 2017 at 10:26 PM
very nice imagery, Carole, matching the painting. If the dripped paint is a water based paint you can just whip it off with soap and water it will not hurt the artwork if it is oils or acrylics . ~*
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July 3, 2017 at 11:16 PM
Thank you, Eve, and thanks also for the tip. I will definitely try that. :) Carole Duet
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July 2, 2017 at 12:02 PM
- I had to come back to see your picture - You have described your painting live and fair, Carol :) - Excellent, works of art and poems - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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July 2, 2017 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. I try! Carole :)
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July 2, 2017 at 5:59 AM
One of my favorite subjects to paint is the lighthouse. I like the way you gave precedence to the storm in this one, and your color choices are perfect. Well done.
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July 2, 2017 at 8:50 PM
Thank you, Lin. I would love to see some of your paintings. Do you have any online? Carole :)
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June 30, 2017 at 8:41 PM
Whimsical and imaginative - loved it, Carole - congrats on your well-deserved placement!
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July 1, 2017 at 11:55 AM
Thanks, Greg. Glad you liked it. Carole Duet :)
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June 30, 2017 at 9:00 PM
Thank you, Greg. I really appreciate your very nice comment. :) Carole Duet
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June 29, 2017 at 10:45 PM
Wow...the closing line is just perfect. Quite a painting in a poem. Congrats on your win.
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June 30, 2017 at 9:03 PM
Thanks Afzal. I'm so glad you liked it. :) Carole Duet
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June 29, 2017 at 9:46 PM
Congrats Carol on a fine win!
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June 29, 2017 at 9:57 PM
Thank you, John. :D Carole Duet
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June 29, 2017 at 7:48 PM
Who can resist a lighthouse landscape and all the adventure it supplies! A speedy start propelled us into your world! Congrats on your win in my contest, Carole!
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June 30, 2017 at 9:10 PM
Thank you, Kim. I appreciate it so much. :) Carole
Wolf Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:25 AM
Where is the painting?
Duet Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 2:59 PM
The painting is there. I just uploaded it but it's hidden. You can see it on my timeline page on Facebook too.
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June 26, 2017 at 3:14 AM
What an enchanting description of your painting Carole. I think the painting must be very beautiful. ..Maria
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June 26, 2017 at 4:43 PM
I'm glad you liked "The Lighthouse", Maria, and soon I'm going to post the painting also. Thanks so much for your visits. Carole Duet
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June 23, 2017 at 8:08 PM
I finally got mine up and just loving this one of yours again, Captain Ahab!!!
Duet Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 1:08 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Will check yours out now.
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June 20, 2017 at 2:08 PM
- Beautiful, you painted it perfectly Carole - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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June 24, 2017 at 1:03 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. I'm going to add my painting to it after the contest is over.
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June 19, 2017 at 1:44 AM
A beautiful picture I can see in your words, Captain;) great piece of art, I should say:)
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June 19, 2017 at 8:16 PM
Thank you, Jo. So glad you liked it. After the contest is over I'm going to add a picture of my painting. Carole Duet
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June 16, 2017 at 9:46 PM
Wow, Carole. I LOVE your approach to this contest. This for ME is a WINNER.
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June 17, 2017 at 12:42 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I hope so. :) Carole
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June 7, 2017 at 8:11 PM
Words can paint an impressive picture. That's what you have done here.
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June 7, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Yes they can, Robert. Thank you very much. :) Carole Duet
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June 7, 2017 at 6:24 AM
Really very cool Capt. Carole I love the scene created by you words, the stormy sea now calm and the lighthouse. I just love lighthouses. There is something so enchanting to me about them which is how I find your poem as well. This was gorgeous.
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June 7, 2017 at 12:12 PM
Thank you so much, Chris. I will be adding my illustration soon: my painting
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June 7, 2017 at 3:42 AM
That last stanza is priceless, Carole, wonderfully written!
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June 7, 2017 at 12:15 PM
Thanks, Darren. So glad you liked it. (I will be adding my illustration soon: my painting...so come back later) Carole
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June 6, 2017 at 11:23 PM
Nicely done... you definately painted a picture there...
Duet Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 12:17 PM
Come back later too because I will be adding the illustration soon: my painting
Duet Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Thank you Joseph! I hope so.
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 11:20 PM
Great stuff, Carole! Best of luck to you
Duet Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 12:19 PM
I will take a new photo of my painting and add it to the poem sometime soon so you can see it again. :) Carole
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June 6, 2017 at 11:24 PM
Thank you, Budgie! ;)
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