Painting My Husband

His squarish jaw, waggles when he thinks,
holding his fingers entwined at his waist.
He stares past his silvery frame, sinks
into mind, until I break in and say hi.

His thin silvery hair, is plush with curls at neck.
He stoops over as if time has weighed in
I see him counting, saying what the heck
here’s a bird, a butterfly, noisy squirrels.

His hands have a pain in them, all webbed
inside, pulling muscles taut, but they wave
they stroke the air, my legs, the seas ebbed
the sand, the sky, building the future in mind.

And when he picks up his violin mistress,
he dances her, never still this man of mine.
His harmonica hoots the day’s stresses,
digging out his soul, bending him like grass.

Sometimes I have to silence his motions,
hold him close to heart, let him sleep.
But always he plays out his commotion
making me music, making him mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Amadore Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 2:45 PM
A beautiful poem, Sheri. Thank you for writing it and for sharing it with us.
Villarosa Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 8:50 AM
A very intimate write for your husband, congrats and thanks also. (^_^) Noel.
Debole Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 4:43 AM
Very nice word painting of your dear husband!
Horne Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 3:07 PM
lovely write, my friend
Jones Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 4:49 PM
What a beautiful picture and poem and man and person you are for writing about him...congratulations
A   Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 6:16 PM
Hi Sheri, a nice winning poem in the "WORD PORTRAIT" contest :-) *LINDA
Macfarlane Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 7:06 PM
I love the image you painted in words of the one you love! Congrats on a wonderful win! Hugs
Delaney Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Huge congratulations Sherry I just knew this would be a 1st place getter. SuZ
Richards Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 7:54 AM
Oh, my goodness......what a lovely lovely poem this is! What a loving and honest to goodness beautiful portrait you have painted with your pen! I love it!
Austin Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 7:17 AM
"His violin mistress." How true. At 83 I can play a few Fritz Kreisler tunes and some Bach unaccompanied, but the arthritis has warped my hands and taken my strength. I don't know whether this has anything to do with your man, but just in case...Love, daver
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 5:19 AM
Very expressive and descriptive..Writing as an artist would see the scene..Great work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your visits..Sara
Lawrence Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 8:29 PM
Painterly effect
Delaney Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 8:09 PM
A great portrait in words.i got a picture of a joyful spirit Suz
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace