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Painting a Masterpiece

i watch you through a palette of my thoughts gently caressing the edges of dreams your stroke tender like fingertips across flesh renders me in tones of dusk as you outline my soul through a sketch of mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/9/2019 8:12:00 AM
A beautifully penned sigh worthy poem that touches the heart and the soul of the reader. There is a desire to this that continues long after the poem is finished
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/9/2019 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Chris...this one came while at work, it wanted to be written because it was still in my mind when my day was done :) hugs
Date: 10/8/2019 3:07:00 PM
Rembrandt is jealous. ~ Dutch Master
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 7:48:00 PM
lol, thank you my friend....see sometimes i chose to paint prettier.... :) hugs
Date: 10/8/2019 10:36:00 AM
You have sketched a masterpiece with this poem, your muse is well mentored by a talented poetess ! The collaboration that you and SO created is amazing - congratulations my friend, you deserve all the attention recognition and accolades - I simply drowned in the poems deep intensity. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 11:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Jennifer for your kind words on both poems...the collaboration was fun...I was honored to do it with such a wonderfully talented poet... hugs and blessings to you :)
Date: 10/7/2019 9:30:00 PM
Another passionate master-piece...You do these so well, my friend :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/8/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend... this one came to me on my bus...surprised i remembered it by time i got home... hugs :)
Date: 10/7/2019 8:34:00 PM
Beautiful as always, I love it and wish you all the best with blessings and much love to you, Gina
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 8:40:00 PM
Thank you my friend...sometimes my muse just scribbles little writes, my thoughts were all over the place today... hugs and blessings to you :) hugs
Date: 10/7/2019 4:01:00 PM
This is metaphorically beautiful, Sandra! I am tempted to borrow some of your paints & brushes:) Regards // paul
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 7:07:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment Paul :)
Date: 10/7/2019 3:12:00 PM
Very nice Sandra :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 7:07:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)
Date: 10/7/2019 1:54:00 PM
Lovely, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 2:01:00 PM
Thank you Line :) hugs
Date: 10/7/2019 12:58:00 PM
WOW!!, well done my friend!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 2:01:00 PM
Thank you my friend, my muse was singing this morning :) hugs
Date: 10/7/2019 12:10:00 PM
- An artist masterpiece with emotions and the right color, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 2:00:00 PM
Thank you my friend :) hugs
Date: 10/7/2019 12:06:00 PM
And a master piece it is! Another gem from your gifted pen, Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 12:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay, my muse is all over the place today, ranting and raving...in all directions :) hugs
Date: 10/7/2019 11:53:00 AM
Delicately, beautifully, delightfully done.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/7/2019 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Caren, this one was haunting me on my bus, but i already had a few penned to myself...my muse is active this morning... hugs :)

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