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Paint Delight -- (Trois Par Huit)

breaking through splashing colors askew drowning deep within one mind complete a stroke of integrity , a dash of deceit I'll turn left and complicate , veer of easy street expose passion discreetly polite bend anxious pushing light paint delight

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/2/2010 1:10:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your success in the contest. This one was very clever..I found the form difficult..you seeme to have mastered it in n interesting way. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2010 11:00:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your HM in Jared's contest with this wonderful write.. so enjoy another honor today .. as your portfolio continues to grow... rightly so..my friend... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Jared Pickett

Date: 6/2/2010 8:59:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your HM in my Trois Par Huit contest... I hope to see you in my Rondel as well....:JP]

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/31/2010 7:06:00 AM

Wow!! You did a wonderful job, I love your poem....an interesting theme.......your own painting of delight, this should do well in the contest! ~ Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/31/2010 3:28:00 AM

Wish you luck if for the contest. A nice write

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 5/31/2010 12:51:00 AM

Very nice Trois Par Huit. You make this form look easy. 4th line, should 'stoke' be 'stroke'. Really enjoyed, good luck if this is for the contest.