Paint

The other night I decided to paint. I picked up the brush and placed it on the canvas. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. I made a stroke, very faint. I opened my eyes and they grew bright. Something inside me broke as I released my pain. To think about this, How it started. Who knew their words would spark something this beautiful? I fell asleep, woke up went to school. I dare not show anyone, I know what would happen I know they would be scared. I went home not telling anyone That I wanted more art. Darker and darker colors, harder and harder strokes. It's been four nights straight. It's not perfect yet, but soon, my masterpiece will be done. Then, maybe they'll miss me.

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Daver Austin

Date: 3/29/2016 11:02:00 AM

Yes, the artist must suffer. So goes the B.S. Have a ball. Congrats, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/4/2016 6:01:00 AM

Hi, Destinee,, thanks for the reply... I'm glad you like it here and are moving your poems to poetry soup... Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2016 9:33:00 AM

Destined,, Welcome to Poetry soup I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Other than that I will read, enjoy and comment with positive feedback. Remember, keep posting, stay in touch, TAP my shoulder when you have a new poem. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. You might find my support addictive. I've been a SOUP Poet for 6 years. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. I'm from Texas, How about you? Tell me a little about your poetic skills. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Destinee Tucker
Date: 3/3/2016 10:10:00 AM

Hey Linda. I've lived in South Dakota my whole life. I've been writing poetry since I was in second grade. I've posted on Wattpad, but I'm moving here. I've been writing dark poetry for the past four years, and found that I'm best at writing this style of poetry. Thank you(: