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Pain

i hate when i dnt feel good it makes me feel like im going insane its hurts so darn bad that it makes me want to cry myself to sleep and then intill the next day the pain is so darn bad sometimes it just makes me wanna just stay in my bed sometimes the pain is so darn bad it is driving me crazy sometimes i just say grr pain cant you go away

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Date: 2/5/2011 9:09:00 PM
Welcome to this site. I know you will like it here. You have described general pain quite well here with simple wording. This work could use some spelling and grammar corrections, but it delivers its message.
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