Pain

i hate when i dnt feel good 

it makes me feel like im going insane

 its hurts so darn bad that it makes me want to cry myself to sleep 

and then intill the next day

 the pain is so darn bad sometimes it just makes 

me wanna just stay in my bed 

sometimes the pain is so darn bad it is driving me crazy 

sometimes i just say grr pain cant you go away
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February 5, 2011 at 9:09 PM
Welcome to this site. I know you will like it here. You have described general pain quite well here with simple wording. This work could use some spelling and grammar corrections, but it delivers its message.
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