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Pain

God gave me you, was are song. I wonder what I did wrong. I wish our relation would of last forever long. It's hard to act like nothing is wrong and hard to act strong. I hate what are friendship has become. I hate the guy I have become. Or became. Without you I'm not the same. I didn't know someone missing in my life, make my life change. I think about you and when I pray it's hard to not say your name. I can't stand this pain. It's killing me and making me go derange. They say this chapter is done and I have to turn the page. Put I want to read it and make life fade-Mario Perez

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/2/2011 10:03:00 AM
Yes though sometimes it is the best thing to do, change the page. Congratulations on your 2nt place, Mario. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/1/2011 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Letdown contest Mario
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Mario. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2011 10:02:00 AM
:) 7+
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Date: 11/17/2011 10:01:00 AM
love really kills like anything ...the pain is really something we can never heal ourselves. You portrayed strong emotions. I liked this
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Date: 11/13/2011 11:00:00 PM
deep... sad expression,,, but pointed out well.....Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..LINDA
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