Pain

Physically limiting Mentally depressing Joy Robbing, Life altering, Joint corroding, Spiraling decent into another spirit defeated. Health declining; Dis- figuring aches limit motion. Limit simple pleasures

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Gary Bechter

Date: 6/19/2010 8:56:00 AM

This is nice.No words written are unused.The theme is portrayed very well. Thanking you,i am for the kind comment on my writing.Not much time i have to spend on this site.Startrd to read some of the pomes listed,to many,many,many.Will take a bit of time. Take care,Gary.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/6/2010 4:07:00 AM

Good morning, this one i like a lot. I enjoyed the part you suggest pain robs the joy from our lives. well said, enjoyed,..p.d.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/16/2010 4:03:00 PM

life altering is always just so wild to me.how a happening so big can change anything in one day, or even less. -Always&Forever Lynette

Mitch White

Date: 4/15/2010 6:57:00 PM

I can feel your pain from here Doris- Ya, me got owies too- The bullet in my spine seems to want out