Owl

The depth of darkest night houses my out spread wings.
Ruffled feathers about my neck are fluttering.
No villain can come within the range of my eye.
No bat or hare can flee far enough once I spy.

With a screech instilling fear, downward do I plunge,
after running prey both too old and, oh so young…
or with stealth and deadly silence will I ascend 
to bring a scavengers end to the rodent kings.

Yet, will I lead you on to glory?
Or claim to tell a different story?
Ah yes, I may..as I am wise.
Leave this life, release your ties!

Athene awaits my return,
Fly with me, see, learn!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/26/2014 2:28:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Owl for taking us around on a night tour with you! You know what you're on about, but can't be otherwise being so wise! Congrats on a lovely win. // paul
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Date: 8/25/2014 4:28:00 PM
This is a nice win Debbie, makes me wonder why this is not in a book... Linda
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Date: 8/25/2014 11:45:00 AM
Congrats on the win.
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Date: 8/24/2014 10:31:00 PM
A lovely tribute to the wisest of hunters.... It would be so amazing to fly with the owls! A very nice write, Debbie! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/24/2014 10:05:00 PM
A lovely write Debbie...congrats on the win
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Date: 6/30/2010 4:41:00 AM
And I decreased the length of line on purpose to make the reader feel like they were leaving with the owl to sit on Athene's shoulder ;)
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Date: 6/29/2010 6:35:00 PM
What a great write, Deborah! Owls are such wise creatures, and you paint that image perfectly.
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations Deborah on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Bird's". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2010 11:05:00 PM
Hey, there WAS an owl in that contest.Congrats with your well deserved win! Luv, andrea
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Date: 6/26/2010 8:35:00 PM
Very very nice. Nice way to think of the prey's fate have to think of that next time I hear those middle of night noises from the woods.
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Date: 6/26/2010 11:49:00 AM
Wonderful Poem-Congrat's on your win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/26/2010 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. The owl is a favorite of mine also. I collected mad made onestuntil I was overwhelmed and had to say no more or move out of my house. Love Joyce
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Date: 6/26/2010 8:34:00 AM
Hey Deb I did one for your contest its the one that says the 5 vows of janism thanks hun
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Date: 6/26/2010 7:44:00 AM
congrats on win deb with this out take of that wise old owl I just love em to me they should be protected speicies keep up the wonderful writing and thanks for your kind comments on my stuff too
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Date: 6/25/2010 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations, Deborah, on 3rd place in my Bird Contest, with this wonderful Sonnet of the wise owl.... Love Constance
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Date: 6/25/2010 8:57:00 AM
Deb, this is GREAT. It was not for the bird contest, was it? I don't recall an owl was there but that is too bad if I'm right. This would have been perfect for it! I noticed an old comment of yours on one of my poems telling me to read "undignified death" you had written? I can't find it. I hope I had read that when you asked me to. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 6/25/2010 6:09:00 AM
No villain can advance.... very watchful eyes of the bird you have selected. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/24/2010 10:28:00 PM
soup mail waiting- Charles
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Date: 6/24/2010 5:55:00 PM
The silent stalker of the night. Excellent write.
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