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Overflowing With Life

Fragments of moonlight illuminated the lighthearted waves of fluttering leaves, as the breeze cradled them in its sainted web it was spinning round with shifting weaves. With unspoken disagreement weighted down by possessive boughs on autumn's eves. Like a thief the wind was overflowing with brown leaves turning swiftly departing 5/11/2017 Poetry Contest: Form O - Only One - Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Date: 5/22/2017 8:44:00 AM
Eve congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write
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Date: 5/21/2017 1:32:00 PM
Congrats Eve to win on this nice piece. Hugs
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Date: 5/21/2017 9:10:00 AM
Congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 5/14/2017 7:52:00 PM
You have created a wonderful poem here, Eve. happy Mother's Day to you too.
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Date: 5/13/2017 7:39:00 PM
What a magnificent entry Eve! I hope to see it a top winner! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/13/2017 2:28:00 PM
Hello Eve. You say overflowing with life. I say overflowing with expression and emotion. This is powerful. Honestly. Well done. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 5/13/2017 3:38:00 PM
I love that, thank you Lisa. ~*
Date: 5/13/2017 7:32:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..I especially liked the first two lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 5/13/2017 5:34:00 AM
Beautiful scenery depicted in these lovely lines, Eve:) great write:)
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Date: 5/12/2017 4:16:00 PM
oh, love this - wonderful personification
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Date: 5/12/2017 3:07:00 PM
Beautiful, serene imagery in your lovely Ottava Rima, Eve. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/12/2017 9:01:00 AM
Hi Eve lovely write enjoyable read ::)))
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Date: 5/12/2017 12:01:00 AM
beautiful Eve, I really like those last 2 lines!
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Date: 5/11/2017 5:48:00 PM
Beautiful write Eve...best wishes
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Date: 5/11/2017 2:18:00 PM
You portray autumn so vividly eve:-) good luck in the contest:-:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 5/11/2017 8:58:00 AM
Beautifully written Eve. This was mesmerizing and even though it is spring here, I could see autumn clearly through your poem.
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Date: 5/11/2017 8:32:00 AM
Only the wind can bring dead leaves to life. Love the imagery, Mrs Eve:)
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Date: 5/11/2017 7:15:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Eve. This is beautiful. A 7.
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