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Over the Edge, Four Flights Up

` I opened the rusted iron gateway bound in chain and wire, to find a landing caked in muddied footprints, scattered about like roaches Magpie shadows course the rain soaked streets and puddle patterns reflect temptation as light flickers from second floor moan filled parlors, painted nails scratching Navigating the fog entrenched alley, garbage bins fallen create a maze of skinned shins and bloodied lips when I come to an arched opening, only hinges remain The staircase up is dark, creaking under my weight I count the holes collected in plaster walls yawning, prior frustrations showing no mercy The stench of tar and factory waste wallows, catching me stumbling through the opening to the roof, gasping in the ever thinning air Dark clouds retaliate for earlier lost days when stale bread pudding was a treat served to those of less fortunate standing What life is this to lead anyway, empty pockets and hand me down promises, watching shadows below taking chances and knocking up opportunities Red door, black door, be careful which you choose, for one color leads to the lower city, the underground where opium flows like crazed sewage The other holds within sexual fantasies and red lipstick smudges, but beware when jiggling those tarnished handles with your best foolish grin, the cost is what you can't afford to lose Swine roam the busy square freely, splurging on last night’s tossed garbage, grunting approval in an off key symphony of stringless digestion, slobbering regurgitation beyond the blinded eyes of the others lost indefinitely within themselves Street lamps spit hot oil through fractured glass dripping onto the formal evening wear and diamond brooches worn by the elite, making their way to the opera house where marble steps are lined with evergreen topiaries losing needles to the addicts of the night A carriage passes, glazed eyes peer from lace curtains, hidden hands roam freely the velvet seats and occupants, as painted wheels follow ruts in the worn cobblestone Smoke spews from stained brick chimneys and cracking mortar discoloring the moon and choking stars with a filth to be reckoned with I sit on this rooftop alone, looking down, scarred legs dangling over the edge four flights up, wondering if anyone would care if I jumped When startled by a noise behind me, footsteps perhaps I turn to see the beautiful silhouette of a woman, flowing hair, hand extended, "I would," she whispers...

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Date: 9/25/2019 5:17:00 PM
Holy Guacamole, what a write. Positively Dickensian-dystopian, but oh-so-much-more-poetic. This goes straight into my FAVES, my 'all-time FAVES.' Wow. You really spun a riveting narrative, chock full of incredibly real images. It gripped me. Bravo, Chris! Cheers, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 9/26/2019 8:15:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend for your always encouraging comments. You humble me with your kindness. I am thrilled you enjoyed this dark one.
Date: 9/25/2019 4:50:00 PM
I remember this one Chris, your storytelling in on display again yooohoo! I love all your details it really paints a vivid scene...now only if you could find your casablanca poem drawing figure 8's on his skin you remember right?
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/26/2019 12:52:00 PM
Found it read both parts faved it!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/26/2019 8:01:00 AM
Ah yes, I remember. It was titled" I heard I might find a poet here" or something like that. That was a favorite of mine. Maybe I'll repost that one soon.
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/26/2019 7:56:00 AM
He was in a bar not really in Casablanca, but had that Bogart/Bacall feel to it smoke filled room she was a femme fatal making moves on him.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/25/2019 4:54:00 PM
No I honestly don't remember though it does sound like me. I may have to go on a search. Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 9/25/2019 1:53:00 PM
Enjoyed this...hope she's as beautiful as can be...Nice write
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Chris Green
Date: 9/25/2019 2:17:00 PM
Thanks so very much Arturo. I am happy you enjoyed this
Date: 9/25/2019 12:10:00 PM
Wow, there is so much detail in this poem and it catches the attention line to line. Then the line...discoloring the moon and choking stars. I like the ending too (she cares if he jumps or not). Well done Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/25/2019 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Heidi for always being so nice to me. You always touch my heart with your beautiful comments
Date: 9/25/2019 11:35:00 AM
wow... this is such a powerful write, one can see the scene so vividly, the filth of a city, the woes of life... an array of all of society's offerings....the end verse stings with pain, one that makes the reader linger in the sadness...i'd extend my hand too and whisper" i would" too my friend....Excellent penning...it brought me to tears in the depths of its pain! hugs...and more hugs...
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Chris Green
Date: 9/25/2019 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Sandy for your kindness and your unending friendship. Your visits always make me smile. You humble me with your wonderful words about my poetry. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one even in its pain and sadness. No more crying though...deal?
Date: 9/25/2019 11:26:00 AM
You are making me eat my words from yesterday... I said something about dreams being found once you step out of the darkness. I thought I knew what you were trying to say in your poem... This new post of yours shows the complete opposite. A beautiful write... even with all the foul details... bravo.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/25/2019 11:36:00 AM
Thank you again. I like to add some shock value in between the pretty poetry every once in a while. : ) Still, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much because I enjoyed writing it, stepping into that era and seeing what I saw as I penned this.
Date: 9/25/2019 11:18:00 AM
oh no, speechless...
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Chris Green
Date: 9/25/2019 11:25:00 AM
Thanks for taking the time to read this lengthy piece.

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