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An oval shape—a ghostly pane, A frame of whispers, soft refrain. It hung in quiet, out of view, Where silence slept and shadows grew. I glimpsed “the oval window, a portal to another dimension,” A whispered truth beyond convention. Glass like jelly, thin and wide, With golden veins that pulsed with pride. It shimmered soft in dusty air, As if it knew I’d someday dare. I pressed my face and felt the tug— A velvet yank, a quantum hug. Through space unstitched, my atoms curled, And spilled into a confused world. The sky was plaid and sang in chords, Clouds played chess with talking boards. A sun rolled by on squeaky wheels, Chased by moons with citrus peels. The trees were made of steel bones, Their leaves composed of dial tones. They spoke in clicks and humming chimes, Barked headlines from olden times. A caterpillar wore a suit, Arguing ethics with a flute. A bus flew past with wings of lace, Stops announced in outer space. The buildings leaned yet stood with grace, Each doorway led to stranger place. One held a café run by crows, Who served haikus in your nose. I met a chair that pondered fate, And told me, “Sit before it’s late.” A fish explained the price of doubt, While paddling through my thoughts throughout. Laws were loose, yet oddly tight, Where wrong felt wrong but also right. Where time wore shoes and danced in place, And mirrors showed your inner face. The rain wrote in cursive script, While thunder hummed in jazz and crypt. Each lightning bolt did grin and strike Where daydreams bloom and rules dislike. A dragon sold umbrellas cheap, Claiming he hadn’t learned to sleep. He traded tales for half a yawn, Slept in pixels just past dawn. An alley wound like thought itself, Lined with clocks that ticked in stealth. Each second held a scent, a tune— Some smelt like soup, some hummed like June. I saw a whale made out of sighs, Who flew beneath the grammar skies. It told me truths I didn't keep, Then sank below a field of sheep. I tasted colours, spoke in stars, Drew maps from dreams and bottled jars. I danced with logic in disguise, And kissed a pun beneath the skies. But then the pane began to dim, Its edges blurred, the borders grim. A voice said, “Time to head on back,” Snapped the world to perfect black. I woke in dust, alone once more, The attic still, the wooden floor. Yet in my palm, a shimmer glowed— A thought the window had bestowed. It calls to me in twilight’s tune, Hums at dusk, sighs at noon— I’ll go again, and very soon.

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Date: 5/26/2025 8:34:00 PM
Hey! This is an interesting and very unique take on this topic. Congrats on POTD! Sorry I was not here sooner- so much going on.
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Date: 5/24/2025 8:41:00 PM
The rhyme, the flow, the amazing imagery, the sheer delight of each stanza: What a gem you've penned Aaliyah. Well-deserved POTD, I say. ~ Gershon
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/25/2025 1:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. I truly appreciate your thoughtful words—they mean a great deal. I'm so glad the poem brought you delight. Your support and POTD congratulations really made my day.
Date: 5/24/2025 7:07:00 PM
Such a wonder adventure into the mystical and slightly absurd, Aaliyah. So many wonderful, whimsical and fun stories and characters! Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings to you! I’ll go again with you!
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/25/2025 1:32:00 PM
Thank you so much. I’m delighted you enjoyed the whimsical journey—it was such fun to create. I truly appreciate your kind words and blessings. And yes, let’s go again—adventure always awaits. Thanks again for the POTD congratulations.
Date: 5/24/2025 5:32:00 PM
So difficult picking a favorite line within, because they're all captivating. I want to highlight this one. :) ' The sky was plaid and sang in chords, clouds played chess with talking boards. ' I can see this image in my mind. :) This is a fun write. Congratulations Aaliyah, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/25/2025 1:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Brandy. I’m really touched by your kind words. I’m so glad that line stood out to you—it was such fun to write, and it means a lot that you could picture it so vividly. Thanks again for the lovely congratulations and support. Hugs back.
Date: 5/24/2025 12:08:00 PM
Aaliyah you’re too funny! "I was four when I partied like it was 1999" that one~ you had me at the first line. Back to the Poem Of The Day..I see where you got it from a lovely mom, please don't let life's worldly stuff get to you, we'll be, the world will be here longer than we think. Congratulations to a very imaginative poetess! I Am Anaya
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/25/2025 1:30:00 PM
Anaya, you’ve truly made me smile—thank you. I’m so glad that line gave you a laugh. Your kind words about my mom and your thoughtful encouragement mean a great deal. Thank you also for the lovely congratulations—I'm honoured. So grateful for your support.
Date: 5/24/2025 12:03:00 PM
Similar to Robert Frost in style, mysterious and personal, very nice writing ????
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/25/2025 1:28:00 PM
Thank you so much. I’m truly flattered by the comparison to Robert Frost. I really appreciate your thoughtful comment and am glad the poem spoke to you.
Date: 5/24/2025 9:41:00 AM
Aayilah, your poem is a delight to read and would make Lewis Carroll smile. A Fav Poem for me. Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/25/2025 1:28:00 PM
Thank you so much. I'm truly honoured by your kind words—what a lovely thought about Lewis Carroll. I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem and made it a favourite. Your congratulations mean a lot to me.
Date: 5/24/2025 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Well deserved. A great poem.
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:54:00 AM
Thank you very much. I’m truly honoured and grateful for your kind words.
Date: 5/24/2025 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your write. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.........
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind congratulations and good wishes. I’m delighted you enjoyed the poem. Wishing you a wonderful day as well.
Date: 5/24/2025 5:44:00 AM
What a fantastic fantasy world you've created here Aaliyah, whimsical and fun. You have quite an imagination. I wrote about stepping into another world in my Portal series. So glad you joined PS. Enjoy your special day
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:53:00 AM
I hadn’t even heard of Poem of the Day until this win, so it’s been a wonderful surprise. Thank you for your ongoing support, Tom. I’m really glad I joined PoetrySoup too—turns out I’m quite good at writing poetry, and the past month of writing has been incredibly therapeutic for me. It’s great to connect with others exploring imaginative worlds like yours.
Date: 5/24/2025 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done!
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:51:00 AM
Thank you very much. I’m truly grateful for your kind congratulations.
Date: 5/24/2025 1:54:00 AM
- Impressive writing - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Aaliyah :) - hugs
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your congratulations and the hugs—means a lot.
Date: 5/24/2025 1:03:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Aaliyah, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Beryl, for your ongoing support. I’m truly honoured to receive the poem of the day recognition and appreciate your kind congratulations.
Date: 5/24/2025 12:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your imaginative write making potd!
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Date: 5/24/2025 12:05:00 PM
Odd!
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:49:00 AM
Thank you. I honestly didn’t even know Poem of the Day existed until this win, so it’s been a lovely and unexpected surprise. I really appreciate your congratulations.
Date: 5/23/2025 3:17:00 PM
This comes for a great imagination , you have the power to create whole new worlds with words, very well done Aaliyah Bravo!
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:48:00 AM
Thank you so much for your generous and encouraging words. I’m truly grateful that my imagination and words resonated with you. Your support means a great deal—thank you again.
Date: 5/22/2025 9:52:00 PM
Aayah Aaliyah, Oh cleverness in a Rhyme, though vaguely unsettling. Like a Rorschach drawing being described in perfect conformity. -Richard
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, Richard! I love your comparison—“a Rorschach drawing described in perfect conformity” is wonderfully vivid. I’m glad the rhyme struck a chord, even with its unsettling edge. Always a pleasure to hear your thoughts.
Date: 5/22/2025 7:50:00 PM
This is truly a remarkable fantastical, phantasmagorical write, Aaliyah. A FAVE for me. Bravo, and thank you for posting it. ~ Gershon
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/24/2025 8:46:00 AM
Thank you again, Gershon, for your continued support. I’m truly honoured that this piece has become a favourite of yours. Your encouragement means a great deal to me.

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