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Outstretched Hands

Now John and Peter went, for it was time to pray, A beggar lame from birth encountered on the way. They found him at the gate, called ‘Beautiful’, this one, So named because, at day, it glistened in the sun. And so he met them there, in need, with outstretched palms, And as they passed him by, he asked to receive alms. So Peter caught his eye; he said, “Now look at us.” For they had things to say, had something to discuss. “I have no gold to give, but what I have I’ll share,” And in the name of Christ, he healed his lameness there. He lept up from the ground and danced with joy; he walked! The people ‘round him stared; they could not stop their talk. Then all were praising God; they recognized this man. A beggar man was healed, the one with outstretched hands. (From Acts 3)

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Date: 2/8/2022 11:57:00 PM
Chap has to work for a living thereafter!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/9/2022 8:00:00 AM
Seems like a pretty small price to pay for being able to walk, but that's just me :-)
Date: 2/8/2022 9:50:00 PM
This is one form I have never tried. I need to go find out what it is, precisely, and give it a try!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/9/2022 11:39:00 AM
Jeff, it sounds and looks good to me. Frankly, I don't know, and can't figure out, how to write one, so I'm very pleased with your efforts. You rarely see a poem in alexandrine. I really don't understand the primary and secondary accent requirements myself. Thanks for your poems. They are quite good, IMHO.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/9/2022 4:14:00 AM
Well, let me know if I messed it up! I wasn't totally clear on the description: iambic hexameter with primary beats on 6 and 12 and secondary beats elsewhere - I tried to stick with primary ay 6 and 12 and secondary at 2 and 8, but sometimes you just end up enforcing that in your head as you read it. I'd prefer constructive criticism to doing it wrong, any day! :-)

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