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Outside My Window,

A subtle foreign noise awakened me during the morning hours. I heard a thrashing of small branches breaking, as it proudly, without care, made it's way closer to me. Quietly I made it to my bedroom window, intense adrenaline flowing through me. Peering out and looking intently, trying to find what was lurking, and drawing attention. Focusing and squinting. To my surprise, making its way through the woods. There stood a majestic form of an animal. At first I thought it was a wolf, but we don't have wolves in our area. Puzzled and bewildered I stood there in amazement. I realized by its size and beautiful fur, it was a lone alpha Coyote. My eyes followed him, as he made his way toward nearby residents. I couldn't imagine where he was heading as he disappeared from my sight. I noticed the window fogging up from my enthusiasm. I wiped the wet glass, from my condensed breath. It was such a rare sighting, I just stood there waiting and looking, hoping to see this lone hunter again. Not too long waiting, my wish was granted. To my amazement he was trotting with a large black cat, dangling from his mouth. My wife watching with me. Screamed! "Oh MY GOD!" she than broke out crying. We both were traumatized by what we had witnessed. Our bedroom window opened our eyes, to the reality of survival in these wild woods. Michael Tor Contest. Outside my window. Bev Smith This actually happened the way it was written.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/22/2015 8:52:00 AM
NATURE AND IS BEAUTY HOLDS BRUTALITY AND NAKED PAINS OF SURVIVAL. GREAT WRITE MY FRIEND..A7
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/28/2015 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Robert. Your comment I just noticed sorry for waiting to respond.
Date: 10/18/2015 7:44:00 AM
Wow very dramatic x I thought I was there LOL wendy
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/18/2015 11:05:00 PM
Thank you Wendy. I appreciate your thoughts Dear.
Date: 10/9/2015 2:22:00 AM
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Date: 9/12/2015 10:11:00 PM
Amazing, you made me feel like I was right there watching with both of you. A winner already. Hugs Eve
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/13/2015 3:12:00 AM
Thank you Eve. It was an incredible experience.
Date: 9/12/2015 6:17:00 PM
Wow!!! What a great write.... Your descriptive is eloquent and excellent..love it..........A.M.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/13/2015 3:12:00 AM
Thank you Afolabi for your Kind words.
Date: 9/12/2015 5:39:00 PM
Wow! Michael, that was such a sight to see. Your skillfully penn alowed me to see it as well. Best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/13/2015 3:14:00 AM
Thank you Alexis
Date: 9/12/2015 8:13:00 AM
Wow what an experience, now I feel I have lived it as well.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/12/2015 10:01:00 AM
Yes Richard my wife and I felt so much for that poor cat. He or she belonged to someone. Ironically my neighbor (After the fact) told me that he knew of some families that were missing their cats. He then reported it to the Game Warden. They captured the coyote they said he was record size. He was relocated further out in the wilderness. I think about the small children that are wondering where their favorite feline is. It's better for them not to know.
Date: 9/12/2015 12:11:00 AM
wow, what a thing to see!! I really liked how you wrote so vividly of this experience. Good luck in the contest.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/12/2015 4:26:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Experiences like these, you never forget.
Date: 9/11/2015 7:24:00 AM
Reality, brute reality, always surprises us but we just have to think for a while and we soon realize that in order to stay alive, something else has to die. Excellent narration that captivates the reader who is rewarded at the end with a shocking conclusion!
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/11/2015 10:41:00 AM
Demetrios expert observation. Thank you very much for your comments.
Date: 9/11/2015 5:39:00 AM
Michael, a nice narration of things, with suspense and scare.. You touch all my senses ~Olive ELoisa =`)
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/11/2015 10:42:00 AM
Thank you Olive for your kind comments.

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