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Outer Beauty

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In a world consumed by fleeting time, Where outer beauty reigns, a paradigm, There is a truth that we often forget: A beauty deeper than just the skin, I bet. Such a tree with roots embedded in the ground, Its branches reaching for the sky are profound. So too is the beauty of the soul within. A treasure to be discovered, to begin. For the outer beauty—oh, how it fades. Like sand slipping through the hands, it cascades, But the inner beauty remains untouched. A flame that forever burns, never hushed. In pure hearts, the light of beauty shines bright. A beacon of love, a guiding light, For it is in those hearts that mirror the divine, Where true beauty blossoms and forever shines. No wrinkles or lines Can dim the radiance that forever aligns, With a spirit that never ages or wanes, In the depths of a heart where beauty remains.

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Date: 8/27/2023 11:17:00 AM
Yes. it fades all too quickly.. but the inner beauty, that grows more wonderous and more wonderful. Amazing writing and reading. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 8/26/2023 11:59:00 AM
In a depth of a heart where beauty remains, no wrinkles or lines makes a difference , when spirit is stronger than any physical entities or what fleeting time can do. I really loved the way this was read and also how its written. Such beautiful imagery and conveys a very philosophical and insightful depth , in sheer eloquence. Is this read also by you? Congratulations on being placed a winner. You truly are a gifted poet
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Date: 8/26/2023 12:10:00 PM
I humbly express my gratitude for your exquisite feedback, dearest poetess IE. Your profound analysis of the poem delves into the very depths of its essence.
Date: 8/26/2023 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations for your placement in the "Let There Be Voice" contest. I really enjoyed reading AND hearing your wonderful poem voiced! Cheers and Best Wishes.
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Date: 8/26/2023 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for the contest, placement, and comment, John. Much appreciate it
Date: 7/31/2023 7:10:00 PM
I like the tree roots comparison, lovely poem you've written here
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Date: 7/30/2023 1:52:00 PM
- Yes, the outer beauty fades if the soul is dark regardless of age, Las - A warm and beautiful poem :) - hugs
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Date: 7/30/2023 7:02:00 AM
External beauty is fleeting. It can be destroyed anytime. But the beauty of the soul is eternal. No robber can steal it away ! A wonderful poem as ever !
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Date: 7/29/2023 5:45:00 PM
Oh if only it were so. Your words are so reassuring, yet can it be true? Do we stay beautiful on the inside? Well if your poem says we do, maybe you are right dear friend. It certainly is a lovely poem.
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