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Out Witted

She came upon the night, when moon was bright. An eerie form, so seductive, you know. Standing, in front with an amazing glow, She said, wishes granted for kiss so slight. Her beauty entranced me, first then contrite. Lustful kiss, gentle, wind began to blow. Before my eyes, changing, so very slow, This hideous creature, fangs set to bite. She never had me sign, contract for fee. Arms rose, she said, “Your wish is granted now“. Indeed scared, now, what would happen to me. Trembling, terrified, she started to growl. Selfless wish, a poet, no vanity. No claim to soul; I now write with new vow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/15/2010 8:19:00 AM
it a great write,beautiful description
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Date: 11/6/2010 12:36:00 PM
Reminds me of a vampire movie I saw....creepy...
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Date: 11/6/2010 8:40:00 AM
love this peace
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Date: 10/17/2010 12:36:00 PM
tantilizing possibilities, I wish I knew what happened? soup mail Light & Love
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:35:00 AM
This was quite a story written in verse, Cecil. I love the way you tricked the seductive witch by making a selfless witch. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/16/2010 8:42:00 PM
Awesome piece Cecil.. if for any contest good luck my friend... a very suspenseful piece luv..happy weekend...
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Date: 10/16/2010 3:29:00 PM
Very glad to learn wishes granted for kiss, hahah,,,,,,very nice twist at the end..cecil
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Date: 10/16/2010 12:20:00 PM
lovely write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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Date: 10/16/2010 11:00:00 AM
Excellent poetry to be reading this Saturday Cecil. I truly enjoyed reading. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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