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Out Pops - a Collab With Olive Eloisa Guillermo

Two poets who couldn't agree
Raise their voices to their loud pleas
One wasn't able to stop
His zip open, out pops!
Haha, it's a pea, not the size of a tree


©J. A. Fraser and O. E. Guillermo 15.18pm, April 07, 2015

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Nette Onclaud Date: 4/9/2015 1:29:00 AM the prince and an olive spinning laughter filled with fun!... greeat write!.. huggs Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 4/9/2015 12:36:00 PM Hi Princess, indeed laughter filled with fun. I so love writing with Olive, she makes me smile so much. We love this piece, hugs, James :) :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 4/8/2015 1:48:00 AM You made me spit out my tea...this was great! Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 4/8/2015 2:58:00 PM Mostly crafted by Olive in a few minutes that it was so cheeky it had to be posted. Glad you enjoyed once again MLK, hugs, Olive and James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/8/2015 12:48:00 AM Dino James, hahahah I really like this.. :D! it made me giggle.. well, I bite the dare and so I bare my share but the end isn't a good flair so I hand it to your care to avoid any err.. :)!!! weeeee!!! I like the ending with it's haha!! :P it is so natural!! winks and hand squeeze.. :D!!//olive_eloisa Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 4/8/2015 1:57:00 AM Another form attempted, another achieved. Loved writing this with you Oliz, let's do so much more in person one day soon. Hand squeezes as I wink my eye, back at you I'll tell you why, mega warm hugs and cuddles for you xx Dino James xx ;-) xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/8/2015 12:52:00 AM I can only remember two or three poems I made which presents lil humor.. :D! but not so much :P! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/8/2015 12:51:00 AM By the way this my second try in writing limerick.. :D!!! as to be honest I don't write poems that is kinda bubbly, cheery and funny.. :D!!! as am bubblier and more jolly in person.. :D! :P I said so.. :D! //olive eloisa Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/8/2015 12:49:00 AM I like the haha so much so I will fave this.. :D! :P!

Jaycee Cervenka Date: 4/7/2015 4:19:00 PM Ohh my. Peas and trees and me oh me left me with a bunch of hee hee hees. very cute you two. ~Janet Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 4/7/2015 3:41:00 PM ha ha ha James and Olive - amazing what pops up at the most unexpected time lol:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 4/8/2015 3:03:00 PM Haha, indeed Jan, indeed ;-) warm hugs for you this evening, James xx