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Out On the Jetty

There was that boundary breached by a thin line, a transparent nerve linking two worlds. My fingers could feel the constant chatter conveyed along that tightened length, the winds annoyance and below, the play of water telegraphed upwards in a quivering morse. I sensed the sweep of currents, the movement of weed and the passing drift of waste shorebound from the gulf. Yet something more had gathered to find voice there, something not fitted to any form I could catch and give a name. A deep resonance had taken the line and crossed that tactile bridge and into mind. I was no more than its clumsy glove wired to whatever will it had and chose to reveal.

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Date: 9/7/2022 3:04:00 PM
I enjoyed this, Paul. As a boy, I fished with my father, and we often went deep sea fishing, dropping a line with multiple hooks to a depth of 200 ft or more. It was tricky to learn when you had something, the response at that depth was so slow, and there was always the anticipation, reeling it in, wondering, and peering into the dark deep to see what the sea would bring forth.
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/7/2022 3:15:00 PM
Thanyou for your comments. I am pleased that the poem has triggered a few, hopefully, happy memories about times spent with your father and fishing. Being in the moment and listening to water speak is one of the joys. Regards

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