Faleshia Murphy Poet Limerick

Out of Your Mind

A light shines bright into the window I can not see
A voice mumbles something like come with me
I pulled the covers over my head then I took a peek
I looked back at my husband who was fast asleep
So I whispered come back later ready he will be

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Dr.Ram Mehta April 5, 2010 at 6:02 AM Congrats for the win. Well penned poem.

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2010 at 3:33 PM Hey, you got a high place. Congratulations!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 23, 2010 at 4:29 AM Good thinking, (ha, ha) Faleshia, Congratulations on your win in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire, with this funny limerick. I’m doubling over with laughter! I must say, it is a fun way to start the day. Laughingly, Dane Ann

John Freeman March 21, 2010 at 11:10 AM Congratulations on a much deserved win Faleshia. Agape, Moses

Robert A. Dufresne March 20, 2010 at 10:00 AM Congrats to you Felishia. Funny!-Robert

Sue Mason March 20, 2010 at 9:18 AM Congratulations on your win in Caroline's contest!

Jessica Arteaga March 19, 2010 at 11:18 PM i would proly do the same o.0 take him not me! lol congrats!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 19, 2010 at 7:05 PM A big congrats Faleshia on your winning poem and placement in the Limerick contest.. enjoy your special win..luv.. Linda-Marie

Joyce Johnson March 19, 2010 at 4:51 PM Congratulations on your win with this great limerick. Joyce

James Fraser March 19, 2010 at 12:09 PM Congratulations Faleshia on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire March 19, 2010 at 10:17 AM Got a great laugh reading your limerick, Faleshia! Congrats on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn

Blue Brain March 12, 2010 at 7:21 PM he he nice!!!

Gerard Keogh Jr. March 12, 2010 at 3:05 PM This has that disorientation that reminds me of those telling moments in the old Twilight Zone or the Outer Limits. I could see this as I read this! Thank you for your kind remarks. P.S. check out "peak" in line three. Might that be Peek instead? Regards, Gerard.

Brian Strand March 12, 2010 at 12:06 AM Nice one Faleshia.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2010 at 12:39 PM hahaha. Is this an alien home invasion?? Cute one. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick March 11, 2010 at 12:31 PM Great out of space Limerick that should do well in the contest...Wish you much success..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

John Beam March 11, 2010 at 10:16 AM thanks for comment very good limerick thanks for sharing AGREEING

Robb A. Kopp March 11, 2010 at 9:28 AM Like I once told a shink," prove that they don't exist" then I'll admit to having a problem". Excellent write though.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 11, 2010 at 8:50 AM Wow! That makes you think! Good one. Thank you for sharing your words. (And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well.) Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Anthony Nutter March 10, 2010 at 4:36 PM Scary little limerick, touches the hairs on my neck demanding attention. Nice write.

Krystal Cochrane March 10, 2010 at 4:25 PM spooky, I like it. Well written. ~ KC