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Out of Control

Oh Lord, my time is running out. Obedience, I try, but my flesh is weak. Overwhelmed with life, I shout. Outnumbered by my own feelings, Over-spilling, yet it's my own undoing. Obstacles come from every direction slapping my cheek. Over and over, steering, jerking me, left to right Out of control at moments, it bites. Once again Lord, stand by my side, unfurl Outstretched arms and take control of my world. 7/7/2022

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Date: 7/11/2022 9:44:00 AM
Hang on for the ride Eve, and trust He has everything in control. Linda
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Date: 7/11/2022 7:49:00 AM
So great, Eve! Kudos! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 7/11/2022 2:15:00 AM
We can dance together with our woes. I need Thursday to be cured. Hugs.
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Date: 7/10/2022 8:24:00 AM
Dear Eva, You've described our World so perfectly. I think most of us share your feelings ~ we've lost control of almost everything. I hope your prayers are answered.
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Date: 7/9/2022 9:40:00 AM
A warm heartfelt write surely heard and dealt with by the lord on your behalf!
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Date: 7/8/2022 8:44:00 PM
Hope your able to get through all of this Eve. Your right about life. Enjoyed reading, god bless you Dear...
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Date: 7/8/2022 8:56:00 AM
Absolutely, Eve. Nice writing.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/8/2022 9:38:00 AM
I'm so happy you are enjoying it, Eve. Thanks, again.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2022 9:31:00 AM
Thank you , Milt. Enjoying your book... Thank you... Blessings
Date: 7/8/2022 7:05:00 AM
Great O Pleiades, Eve. The tone is both challenging and soothing. I pray that all of your prayers are granted.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2022 7:22:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad, I'd forgotten what the form was. Blessings friend
Date: 7/8/2022 1:12:00 AM
we do feel out of control at times. But God always helps. Hugs.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/8/2022 7:22:00 AM
Thank you for you blessings, Victor. Blessings my friend

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