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Out of a Dream

My dreams of her had colored all my youth, Her beauty, grace, and charm were all I sought. I reached for her in dreams to learn the truth, The art of love in her embrace was taught. As years progressed and youth was vainly spent, I dreamed her less and less as time slipped by. The art of love turned act and lacked intent, What dreams I dreamed were desolate and dry. I yearned for love, I sought it night and day, 'til one bright morn a wondrous thing occurred. I browsed a shop, and when I stopped to pay, A vision from those faded dreams appeared. And then I felt my heart stop for a while, She'd dreamed me, too, I saw it in her smile.

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Date: 4/17/2023 6:10:00 AM
OH, eat your heart out Billie Boy...the subtle, sensuous sonnet has reappeared....I shall FAV this as I have a soft spot for Sonnets
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 4/17/2023 10:48:00 AM
Thank you, John. These are very much a once-in-a-blue-moon creation for me. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 4/16/2023 1:28:00 PM
Very beautiful, Jim, and very touching, too…
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 4/16/2023 1:47:00 PM
Ilene, thanks.
Date: 4/16/2023 11:39:00 AM
How beautiful, Jim! Glad you found those smiles!!
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 4/16/2023 1:46:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 4/16/2023 10:40:00 AM
Hello Jim, this tells me that the dreams do come true. I have a lot of repeated dreams. Hopefully one of them will come true. That is the good dreams not the bad ones. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2023 5:09:00 AM
Hello Jim, Yes sometimes they do. Enjoy your day my friendc. /Darlene\
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 4/16/2023 10:41:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene...and sometimes they do.
Date: 4/16/2023 10:30:00 AM
Well done, Jim:) A wonderful sonnet!(IMO) A pleasure to read.
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 4/16/2023 10:40:00 AM
Daniel, thank you. This piece is the culmination of a project I put myself through several years ago when I was trying to learn how to write a sonnet. I think it turned out pretty well. Glad you enjoyed it.

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