Out of a Dream

My dreams of her had colored all my youth,
Her beauty, grace, and charm were all I sought.
I reached for her in dreams to learn the truth,
The art of love in her embrace was taught.
As years progressed and youth was vainly spent,
I dreamed her less and less as time slipped by.
The art of love turned act and lacked intent,
What dreams I dreamed were desolate and dry.
I yearned for love, I sought it night and day,
'til one bright morn a wondrous thing occurred.
I browsed a shop, and when I stopped to pay,
A vision from those faded dreams appeared.
And then I felt my heart stop for a while,
She'd dreamed me, too, I saw it in her smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawless Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 6:10 AM
OH, eat your heart out Billie Boy...the subtle, sensuous sonnet has reappeared....I shall FAV this as I have a soft spot for Sonnets
Slaughter Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Thank you, John. These are very much a once-in-a-blue-moon creation for me. Glad you enjoyed it.
Bauer Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Very beautiful, Jim, and very touching, too…
Slaughter Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 1:47 PM
Ilene, thanks.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 11:39 AM
How beautiful, Jim! Glad you found those smiles!!
Slaughter Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Thank you, Kim.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 10:40 AM
Hello Jim, this tells me that the dreams do come true. I have a lot of repeated dreams. Hopefully one of them will come true. That is the good dreams not the bad ones. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:09 AM
Hello Jim, Yes sometimes they do. Enjoy your day my friendc. /Darlene\
Slaughter Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 10:41 AM
Thanks, Darlene...and sometimes they do.
Turner Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Well done, Jim:) A wonderful sonnet!(IMO) A pleasure to read.
Slaughter Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 10:40 AM
Daniel, thank you. This piece is the culmination of a project I put myself through several years ago when I was trying to learn how to write a sonnet. I think it turned out pretty well. Glad you enjoyed it.
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