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Out my window, I see golden tomorrow coming, trailing varied colors, as the bees are humming People flitter past, in the sunshine of their lives Hummingbirds hover in air, when beauty arrives. Out my window, there is scent of summer spice; And vast blue and jade is clashing, so very nice! And azure sweetheart songs are forever playing like silver light of a crescent moon, ever staying. Out my window, there is warm wind in red roses and yesterday's recall lies in hues, as day closes.

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Date: 8/23/2023 8:13:00 AM
Love this Evelyn. Another gem from your poetic pen. Gorgeous imagery. I especially love the last line. Delightful! Thank you for sharing and inspiring.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/23/2023 11:28:00 AM
You have my very deep thanks, Christina. :)
Date: 8/17/2023 8:20:00 PM
Hello Evelyn,a wonderful poem.Best wishes in the contest! Have a great day!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2023 9:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Mulu. Blessings
Date: 8/17/2023 9:29:00 AM
Got to give you a FAV for this one, perfectly delightful. "People flitter past, in the sunshine of their lives" -- great poetic language. Love it!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2023 2:09:00 PM
Thank you for the pleasure of your appreciation, and also for your fave.
Date: 8/17/2023 4:35:00 AM
Much enjoyed your description of hues through your window, Evelyn. Beautiful images throughout.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2023 2:07:00 PM
So much pleasure is derived from windows. Thank you very much, Vijay.
Date: 8/17/2023 1:29:00 AM
- A colorful and wonderful view from your window, Evelyn :) - Beautiful ... a golden tomorrow coming :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2023 2:04:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind thoughts and well wishes, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
Date: 8/16/2023 8:24:00 PM
So many great lines such as: Out my window, there is warm wind in red roses
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2023 2:02:00 PM
You have my deepest thanks, Kim.

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