Out My Window

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August 16, 2023

Contest : Out My Window

Sponsored by : Craig Cornish

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The listless last mile, beyond twilight, the path undefined, the configured metaphor, the engrossing panorama on my kaleidoscopic window, the mirror on the world framed. The tapestry of life’s exuberance, the euphoric fabric, weaved by the momentous strands, the swirling enchant menagerie on en echelon flight, delight designed with the choreographed cloud clumps in exaltation sky, serenading out of the blue, the song stimulates the spirit of the famous and the faceless. The tune in rippling emotion crescendo, elated feeling flows in melody, the mindscape sculpted. The imagery of time and people cascades the beauty of life, I see out my window.

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Craig Cornish

Date: 8/29/2023 6:47:00 PM

Thanks so much for your creative entry Subimal, you have a gift for translating life into meaningful art.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/31/2023 10:00:00 PM

Thank you very much for the placement and for your encouraging comment that I value so much.