Our Year In Love

Our Year In Love Contest Sponsor: Olive Eloisa Guillermo There he was, staring at me like I was the only girl in his world, as I slowly passed his locker that was when I realized I was allured. Date on Friday night turned into our sweet summer romance, and to think it all started with one intense glance. We were finally together, in such young puppy love were we, oh my word, did our first year in love became our tender destiny. Hand in hand by the sea shore with gentle kisses on my cheek, I never knew that I would find what I so longingly had seeked. In our first three hundred sixty five days we were never apart, for he was definitely a keeper, as I gave him my fragile heart. Blossoming and blooming, our rose garden lost its thorns, from then on until today we have weathered many storms. Looking back at that first year my heart starts to patter, as long as we were together that's all that really mattered. Our completeness with in each other started our book of life, for only six years later, we became a loyal man and wife. Date Written: January 31, 2016

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Date: 2/21/2016 12:59:00 PM
Beautifully written and so romantic, Laura. Congratulations on nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/21/2016 7:29:00 PM
Thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 2/21/2016 12:42:00 PM
Seems not all first loves are unrequited. Wonderful write with a fairy tale tomorrow. Congratulations on your win, Laura. Peace my dear:)
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Date: 2/21/2016 7:28:00 PM
thank you Daniel...:)-luloo
Date: 2/21/2016 7:49:00 AM
This is such "happily ever after" ending. . . the way it should be. Congratulations, Luloo.
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Date: 2/21/2016 8:55:00 AM
Many thanks lovely Lin :)-luloo
Date: 2/21/2016 4:49:00 AM
Laura, Congratulations. From meeting to marriage, told so fluently.
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Date: 2/21/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Steve :)-luloo
Date: 2/21/2016 2:41:00 AM
*** School lover then to long lasting commitment, wow!!! Such lovely getting to know then deciding to end it in marriage.. =`) romantic! KUDOS!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 2/21/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Olive.. I am very honored for my placement..I enjoyed this contest more than many others. It brings me back to simple days and simple pleasures...Thanks-luloo
Date: 2/3/2016 6:38:00 PM
Wonderfully penned gem.
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Date: 2/3/2016 8:11:00 PM
Thank you Iris :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 2/1/2016 2:21:00 PM
A 7! Wonderful phrasing and fabulous imagery... superb couplet rhyming too! Well done Laura!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 2/1/2016 2:24:00 PM
Thank you Keith...:) -luloo *smiles*
Date: 1/31/2016 7:20:00 PM
so heartwarming i could feel the warmth of true love... well done, lou!..huggs
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:41:00 AM
Thank you sweet Nette :) *smiles* *hugs* -luloo
Date: 1/31/2016 6:03:00 PM
true romance at its best, simply beautiful
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:40:00 AM
Thank you Brian :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/31/2016 4:04:00 PM
A lovely romance with truly a happy ending.
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Tim *smiles* :) -luloo
Date: 1/31/2016 2:36:00 PM
oh Luloo this unfolding romantic story is so charming:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:37:00 AM
Thank you lovely lady :) *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/31/2016 2:20:00 PM
This is beautiful, congratulations on a romance that began as a bud and grew into a bouquet, thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 1/31/2016 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Edward, you are always so sweet :)*smiles* -luloo
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