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Our Tenderness Flows

In lacy black She invitingly lures The love of her man Strong and pure On our bed she lies As i see through the black Her curvaceous body Shows no lack Enticing in pout Her lips glossed She draws me in I'm about to be bossed My hands wander Over her black attire While the man in me In furnace desire Our souls meet Flesh to flesh As her breasts stand proud Through the lacy black mesh Bodies impressed As we join at the hips Lips to lips As our loving grips In rhythmic sway Our tenderness flows As my love for my love Internally grows In explosive delight Her body arcs Our love this evening Orchestral manoeuvres in the dark http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-6.php

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/6/2009 12:38:00 PM

No life without passion! Well written, James! I especially liked the last two lines. And thank you for your comment on Atacama which I appreciated. I once lived close to this desert(in Antofagasta) and visited often the place. Nobody can imagine how different the desert could be without being there once. Keep your pen flowing....Gert

John Freeman

Date: 11/6/2009 10:49:00 AM

Passionality written Jame. Sincerely Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/6/2009 4:46:00 AM

Wow, James! "Orchestral maneuvers in the dark" says it all. Quite a passionate write from a soulful man. Love to the Highlander with Heart! Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2009 3:09:00 PM

Nicely done passionate write. Keep writing. Sara Thanks for the comments on my work.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/5/2009 3:00:00 PM

Well I must say she is a lucky lady.. Highlander... and u are a lucky man... great descriptive verses done so tastefully and intriguing the reader to continue to culmination... great job .. u are a master with words... and scenes... only someone in love could write this way... thankxxx for your ever inspiring and prolific comments tonight on my many poems posted today.. I hope I will always be an asset to the Soup.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. Sweetie...