Our Stint

Let’s get the hint That our stint On stunning Earth Has massive worth Cuz how we act Does yes impact Where we’ll venture In the future So it’s good to be good Whenever one could And keep in mind To just be kind If that’s all there is to it Let’s all simply do it.

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J. Summers

Date: 2/25/2023 8:27:00 PM

Good poem, I like the brevity and word choices. John

Hannah Borke
Date: 2/26/2023 3:28:00 AM

Thank you.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 6/14/2021 9:12:00 PM

Amen, amen, amen! Cool poem that's short, sweet, and to the point. You go girl!

Hannah Borke
Date: 6/10/2022 9:02:00 AM

Thanks.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/21/2021 8:52:00 PM

Amen, Hannah! You are right. Kindness is not 'rocket science,' as they say. Light and Hope, Gershon

Hannah Borke
Date: 6/10/2022 9:01:00 AM

Thanks.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/26/2021 7:45:00 AM

Nicely rhymed Hannah. Small gestures/words can have huge effect! :) Linda

Hannah Borke
Date: 3/29/2021 9:24:00 PM

Thanks for your comment.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/14/2021 7:50:00 PM

Little acts of kindness, listen & keep my mouth shut works for me! Good one, Hannah!

Hannah Borke
Date: 3/15/2021 12:21:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. I wonder how this poem is perceived by others, cuz it’s ridiculously simplistic.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/14/2021 11:28:00 AM

My late father-in-law always knocked on wood, but it didn't do him any good as he still died like all the rest of us will do. Aloha! Rico

Hannah Borke
Date: 3/14/2021 12:32:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. I meant we need to knock on our own wooden foreheads to remind of what we’ll face at the end of the trip.