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Our New Dog -Re-Edited

Our new dog’s name is Lucy – Lucy Loo. and I like alliteration so much the part of “Loo” I simply added to her Lucy name. Was that a clever touch? Our dog’s an Aussie and so smart and sweet. She likes her walks but likes too much to eat, and always I can tell she wants a treat! The instant I first saw her dear brown eyes, Lucy was the dog for us; she's a prize! There's one bad thing: early she likes to rise! I like to sing and tell her, “I love you.” Walking down the streets, as her leash I clutch, her little name, Lucy Loo, I repeat. She'll be our new best friend. That's no surprise! Feb. 16, 2023 For Emile Pinet's Fragmented Rhyme Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/1/2023 9:31:00 PM
lovely poetic writing; nice to read; congrats on the placement
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Date: 3/1/2023 8:25:00 PM
Dear Andrea, such a lovely poem about Lucy Loo.. indeed, that was a clever touch, and a touching piece about your new best friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Emile’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/1/2023 1:26:00 PM
A lovely best friend Andrea. I'm sure she knows how much you love her ;) Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/1/2023 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your poem "Our New Dog", has earned you a distinguished place in my poetry contest. I was very strict; and yet, your poem earned you a place on the winners list my friend, Emile.
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Date: 2/18/2023 8:46:00 AM
She’s so neautiful, just like the poem. Bless you for not being selfish. It takes lto love to have one, You work, have a family and have time for her. Great. Not everyone has enough heart to care for a dog. Some just sit here commenting all day…sad,lonely poets Thinking they are saints!not. Panagiota
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Date: 2/17/2023 2:01:00 AM
Cute. I see so many dogs around in our streets. Alas I have limited time to keep one.
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Date: 2/16/2023 11:29:00 AM
A cute write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 2/16/2023 6:34:00 AM
Love your tale of Lucy Lu.
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