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Brilliant light, soft white, engulfs our presence Innocent heart joyous with excitement Luminescent soul with love in parlance Vibrant heart dissolves in the bliss current Prismatic hues of love, enliven form Ecstatic in our native element Magnetic bliss bubbles, swamp us in swarms Automatic and swift is souls ascent 16-June-2021

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Date: 6/16/2021 5:40:00 AM
This is so beautiful and expressive. To me, it describes a soul ascending to Heaven right after that last breath! Janice
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Date: 6/16/2021 5:51:00 AM
Thank you Janice! Better still, why not so feel here & now, in the flesh?

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