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Our Love Through the Years-Collab For Contest

(What an honor it was from me when a poet whom I greatly admire asked me to collaborate with him. I was absolutely thrilled! I love his work! This is the result of our "conversation" together. Yes, that is truly what it was...a conversation. He'd send me a line and I'd respond...back and forth...till we produced this!!! Hope you enjoy!) From that night when I chased around the room to get your name; From when my eyes teased and enticed you to play a lover's game. I thought that you were too perfect, to ever notice me. Yet there was a sweetness in your smile that wouldn’t let me be. Strangers talking and laughing for hours about … everything - Each word a hidden promise the joy knowing you would bring . I hated myself for thinking "Is this too good to be true?" "Am I insane to think I've found my universe in you?" But each day I found more love in you - more a kindred spirit. You had me reeling, feeling eternal love I would inherit. The day you said you'd marry me was beyond my wildest dreams. I knew in my heart of hearts, we'd swim in passion's streams . So many years have flown since that time when love was new, The time when every single kiss refreshed like the morning dew, But time has stolen that magic thrill - it has gone away Bereft, I sit agonizing about what to do or say. And yet, my love, I wonder, are those thrills just childish things? Are they meant to be only saved for years of youthful flings, And for our aging memories to delightfully recall? Is our love and life like seasons - like springtime is to fall? My darling, I know the answer to all of this that is your musing, We can define the hue of love with words of our own choosing. In each and every stage of life, love has its depth and grace, And even now, it is displayed with such beauty on your face. Tis true, I do believe with time love takes a different glow, It shines a softer light in place of dancing gaudy show. But this we must never forget, always to remember, Love is a soft hand on the cheek, a deep kiss that is tender.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/21/2014 6:11:00 PM
This is so good, I'm glad I read this one again,
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Date: 2/10/2014 6:19:00 AM
I love both of your comments. It is so cool to see this one is now moving up in the top 100. Well done and applause to you both. Hugs Rick
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/10/2014 10:42:00 AM
I'm so glad....I LOVE That poem. It deserves to do well!!! At the airport!!! Off to Cyprus. Can't wait...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/10/2014 6:22:00 AM
Ps the poem you inspired Thought police just placed in a contest. Thanks for the inspiration.
Date: 2/7/2014 8:50:00 AM
A truly masterful piece you both should be very proud of.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/7/2014 8:53:00 AM
:) I think it went well. I am really proud of this piece. :) It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy. Thanks, Richard! It's nice to get asked to collaborate! :) I enjoyed my collab with you way back when!
Date: 2/5/2014 5:25:00 PM
† I Could Have Easily Written This With You, Sweet Beautiful Eileen ˜ Every Beautiful Word And More These Emotions Their Feelings Evoked This Love....Because There Is A Girl That I Love As No Verse Would Contain Truly, My Love For Her ˜ Your Poetry Reaches Deeply And This Jewel, Belongs In Faves ˜ My Love, Forever, John
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/5/2014 5:40:00 PM
OH...how sweet! Thanks ever so much for your lovely comment. I'm so touched. Glad you liked this! :) I'm honored!
Date: 2/2/2014 12:06:00 PM
this is a very romantic collaboration, Eileen. Just wonderful!! So who is the other poet? I am going to do this contest now and I am curious can both poets submit the same poem? And then if it won, it would appear twice on the winners' list, right? Her contest rules do not say anything about that.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/3/2014 8:32:00 AM
ANDREA.! Thank you, my dear. I'm so pleased you liked it. The other poet is CRAIG...He asked me to collab with him, and I was absolutely thrilled. He's been very supportive of my work and I was honored that he would pick me to work with him. I can truly say this was a joint effort as we did it bit by bit and build on it together. I don't know any of the answers to your questions, but I did enter it. I don't know if Craig did as well. Let me know if you have any answers...Hugs
Date: 2/1/2014 1:02:00 PM
This is perfect....wow....I predict winner....:-) :-) :-) a truly flawless flow...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/3/2014 8:33:00 AM
Really, MD. I sure hope so....I've been contest shy for some time now and have just started entering again. I hope it does well. I need a win! ;) Hugs and love to you!
Date: 2/1/2014 11:28:00 AM
this brings me joy as your words spoke delicately of love overflowing.. how beautiful, eileen!.. hugggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/3/2014 8:46:00 AM
:) Thanks, Nette. I'm sorry I'm late responding....It's a busy time in a teacher's life. End of the semester and I need to prepare exams and get my grades in....Thanks for your patience and love... Hugs
Date: 2/1/2014 9:48:00 AM
Trumpets are blowing, the clouds have parted and the sun is shining brightly. This is a trancendent piece of writing. Love is beautiful in its many expressions and seasons.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/3/2014 2:02:00 PM
Thank you, Richard for your kind remarks on my collab with Craig. I'm glad you liked it. I'm very pleased with it too. :)
Date: 2/1/2014 1:03:00 AM
Wow what a beautiful and lovely and romantic poem Eileen! Great write my Persian Queen! :) xoxo write back soon.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/3/2014 2:04:00 PM
:) Hi, Chris...thanks for the visit and your lovely comment. I'm glad to have this lovely title! :) Love reading your work. :)

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