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A Collaboration 

Broken Wings and Laura Loo

In my garden I heard a fluttering, and with tiny chirps a little bird was muttering. It was the smallest, sweetest bird I ever saw ! Hummer then took a bath as I watched in awe, his wings beat so fast with no stuttering. then Hummer stuck his long needle bill in my Bourgeous ! Spinning fast my glittering friend feeds on flower nectar- Oh, I would love to be a hummingbird collector ! What a feisty, little dynamo- so sheen ! Hummer has plumage iridescent and serene, I call him my flower garden inspector- I put out a sugar feeder and the next day I had fourteen ! They were pure grace and innocence combined- such a rarity of hummingbirds so hard to find! Gentle with a kaleidoscope of colors bright, crystalline to medallion; what a gorgeous sight. All mixed like the rainbow of an artisan’s mind, making all the worries of my day alright. Hummer still lives outside my gazebo’s vine, sometimes inviting friends over to sugar dine- If only he knew how special is to nature’s best, exquisite and astonishing, I have confessed. Magnificent and breathtaking; hummingbirds divine- I will admit with this beauty I have been blessed! __________________________ January 13, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Our Little Hummingbirds Copyright Protected, ID 18-9822-77-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Grab A Partner - Collaboration sponsor, Joseph May Inspired by Image # 4 Second Place

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Date: 4/21/2018 5:17:00 PM
Belated congrats on your win with this fine collaborative poem, BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/22/2018 9:16:00 AM
Line thank you for visiting my poem and for the congrats
Date: 1/21/2018 4:04:00 PM
What a charming poem Constance, many congrats on your win with LuLooe in the collaboration contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 4/22/2018 9:16:00 AM
Jan thanks for visiting my poem and for the congratulations
Date: 1/21/2018 5:03:00 AM
A beautiful write Broken Wings...Congrats and thanks for your support..
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Constance La France
Date: 4/22/2018 9:17:00 AM
Joseph thank you for the congratulations and the compliment
Date: 1/15/2018 4:54:00 PM
A beautiful collaboration on a an exquisite bird who breathes 250 beats a minute a and whose wings flutter 50 to 250 beats a minute! My compliments!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/22/2018 9:18:00 AM
Ralph thank you for the beautiful compliment
Date: 1/14/2018 7:04:00 PM
As I told Laura, this is a sure win and a fantastic collaboration you did with Laura Loo. I also love that number four image the best! You two really do compliment each other so nicely.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/22/2018 9:19:00 AM
Andrea thanks for visiting our poem and for the comment
Date: 1/14/2018 4:18:00 PM
Thank you for the SECOND opportunity to write with you sweet Broken Wings! I just posted the complete poem on my page. I am blessed to know you lovely lady :) Have a great day and thanks again! :) -luloo
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Constance La France
Date: 4/22/2018 9:20:00 AM
Laura writing with you was a pleasure our styles are do similar it creates a seamless write
Date: 1/14/2018 9:20:00 AM
This is beautiful, well written!. I love to see the hummingbirds here. You have shown them so well. Good luck in the contest :)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/22/2018 9:21:00 AM
Heidi thanks for visiting my poem and for that nice comment
Date: 1/13/2018 6:32:00 PM
Love, love, love little hummingbirds. I can't keep the bees out of their feeders! I can tell you love them, too.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/22/2018 9:23:00 AM
Sun thanks for visiting our poem and for the comment. I love hummers too !

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