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Our Lips, Our Eyes, Our Love

The thick plush carpet piled high It cushioned our backs We fell to the floor, embraced in a kiss It seemed an eternal kiss And there was nothing else in the world Just our lips, our eyes, our love As the hours transpired Oblivious to time We greeted the dawn and forged a memory To live in our hearts, forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/26/2017 4:33:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem here Mike! Well done on crafting such a magnificent piece of work!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/26/2017 5:06:00 PM
Thank You Kudzal, Your kind words are most appreciated!
Date: 8/24/2017 12:48:00 PM
Love the setting! A lovely poem!
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Date: 8/24/2017 10:07:00 AM
You said it all Mike, great romance, well carried poetically
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/24/2017 10:15:00 AM
Thanks much Michael
Date: 8/24/2017 9:40:00 AM
Wow Mike, this is very nice! :) Well written and expressed.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/24/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Heidi
Date: 8/24/2017 8:07:00 AM
Love to the fullest of contentment. Nicely written, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/24/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Lin

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