Our Last Night

For Timothy Lee, the Best of Me
Since our first night, I have dreaded the last, thus my passion tightly fashioned clasp. You are my one safe harbor, my refuge, my cure for stress overload and pressed blues. No matter any day’s shatter and stews, at night I am consoled right beside you where your skin soothes me secure again and our wrapped limbs re-thread joy’s ends. Some tomorrow’s sorrowful horizon scripts our final intermixed, heart snuggle. I cannot help but hope that it is me who first dies and avoids solitude's struggles. Our bed of blessed satisfaction defined, would uncover woe for the rest of time. Come the end of nights molding with you, comes the end of our love's active value.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sands Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations for #23 on the Best New Poems List :)
Makama Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.
Godwin Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Thank you, Funom, for such enthusiastic comments. I embrace your words, they have me jumping up and down inside. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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December 2, 2018 at 6:32 PM
Congratulations, CayCay!
Gaul Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Cay Cay, you say it all with passion. This is deep love at its best, so we'll expressed. Congratulations.
Roper Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 10:59 PM
A passionate and intimate wonderful well written poem, CayCay, congratulations on your 1st place win.
Ashley Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 9:21 PM
A deeply personal and passionate poem, CayCay. So beautifully expressed in such a meaningful and sensuous way. Congratulations on your wonderful win with such a lovingly soft and moving piece. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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December 1, 2018 at 4:52 PM
Wonderfully intimate. Congrats CayCay!
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December 1, 2018 at 11:11 AM
- Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win, CayCay :) - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
Godwin Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Thank you, sweet one ... CayCay
One Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 10:32 AM
A romantic and sensual poem CayCay, one that shows true love for another.. Beautiful words.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Godwin Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Thanks so much for your sweet words and the efforts you put into Soup. You are a valued light that remains on even when you are absent. All the best ... CayCay
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November 30, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Sometimes waiting for the last embrace makes living in the present intolerable, Cay Cay. From experience, I can only suggest living in the moment. Your heartfelt poem touches on a feeling that many have experienced. Very beautifully written. Sort of free verse mixed with a bit of rhyme and I like that. It works well and I'm sending best wishes for the contest. Hope you enjoy the holidays! Hugs, Carolyn
Godwin Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:28 PM
I am very much an advocate of staying in the moment, but the human in me surveys fears now and again, and this is one. It's better to have danced, than to never have known the feel - I believe that, too. Thank you for such sweet comments. All the best ... CayCay
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November 30, 2018 at 9:59 AM
They say all good things must come to an end and I don't buy that for a minute. Though I do know all things end, the good ones last in our memories as your poem will in mine my friend.
Godwin Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Such sweet comments, thank you for gifting me thus. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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November 30, 2018 at 7:53 AM
CayCay, first let me wipe my tears, wow what an emotional write, I can tell you from experience that the end of love is shattering, that empty bed is a dark void, well done and a FAV for me ~
Godwin Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:31 PM
I can't imagine how you cope, I think of you often, your story (as little as I know) and your coping. Your journey has a purpose, unique to you and, I believe, as long as you're true to your heart, you are exactly how and who you are meant to be. Some day we can go home, where there is no pain. All the best to you, all the days ... CayCay
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November 30, 2018 at 5:51 AM
- Beautiful written, CayCay ... luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Godwin Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Thank you for visiting and the sweet comment. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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November 30, 2018 at 3:06 AM
so soft and beautiful, no one ever wants the end, I really felt this in my heart.
Godwin Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:34 PM
Arthur, your comments touched me and I embrace them. Thank you ... CayCay
Duet Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 11:29 PM
Sweet poem, CayCay. It's such a comfort to sleep wrapped in love. Lucky you!
Godwin Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 8:36 PM
Carole, I am indeed blessed and so grateful, but girl, I did not get it right the 1st, 2nd or even 3rd time. As long as you are alive, love can and does happen. Glad you enjoyed the poem and it is always good to see you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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