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Our Lady Still

The light has faded from her eyes, those eyes that used to flash with green before the cancer I despise crept underneath her skin. . . unseen.   It spread and left its mark unclean. The light has faded from her eyes. She still is regal though less keen to act the bit. Oh, how she tries!   Our lady still, she can’t disguise the ways she’s changed with each routine. The light has faded from her eyes. Our dear pet seems so old and lean! And in the time still left between her dying and the day she dies, I'll miss the most her spirit's sheen. The light has faded from her eyes. Sept. 2, 2018

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Date: 9/13/2018 4:14:00 PM
A beutifully sad elegy written with exquisite phrases especially the repeated refrain. Love it.
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Date: 9/13/2018 1:33:00 PM
Wow, so sad, I dread my beautiful kelpie getting old
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Date: 9/11/2018 2:41:00 PM
This is so sad Andrea. It becomes heartbreaking to lose a cat you have cherished for so many years. Your poem is a lovely tribute to her. xxoo
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Date: 9/6/2018 7:28:00 AM
awww, a lovely tribute to Razzamataz - I hope the old girl's got plenty of time left yet
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/6/2018 5:44:00 PM
this is actually a remembrance of Callie, the best cat I ever had. She died years ago and this is how I felt during that time. Razzmatazz is doing surprisingly well though diabetic and walking flat footed.
Date: 9/5/2018 2:34:00 PM
Another wow for this!
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Date: 9/4/2018 1:27:00 PM
Oh Andrea, this moved me. It is so hard to watch a pet grow old! This is great poetry and a moving story!
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Date: 9/3/2018 7:34:00 PM
Oh, such a moving and sadly beautiful poem, Andrea.. This touched my pet loving heart so deeply. Elegantly expressed emotions that bring me back to memories and a tear... Best for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/3/2018 2:00:00 PM
Haunting, but lovely, Andrea. Through it all, she is still the lady. Well-done. ~ gw
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Date: 9/3/2018 11:32:00 AM
Lots of love in this one Andrea, peace be with you...
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Date: 9/3/2018 8:26:00 AM
Very sad...but beautifully written Andrea...love & pets...^WW^
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Date: 9/3/2018 7:27:00 AM
Been there with one ... more than enough.
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Date: 9/3/2018 7:10:00 AM
Though it speaks of sadness, your poem flows so elegantly. You captured the changes in her personality very well, Andrea... The pain both feel when facing such illness.
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Date: 9/3/2018 7:02:00 AM
I feel the sadness in every line and the repetition accentuates the feel
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Date: 9/3/2018 1:47:00 AM
Death is a horrible feeling no matter man or animal, very touching!
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Date: 9/3/2018 1:12:00 AM
So sad to see a pet fade, they are part of the family. But you have to let them go, its the kindest thing to do. Tom
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Date: 9/3/2018 1:05:00 AM
one of our cats is aging...she wants attention so badly : /
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