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'our Journey'

I know you hate having me around I feel your fear, the angst, ‘cause I am a sign of weakness even though I bring hope at times, other times a brighter day a new perspective on a foggy splay… Let me help you get past the hurt, Let me help you deal with the loneliness Take me with you on this journey, Turn your frown into a smile As I trickle down your beautiful face Let me cleanse you and take the pain away… Inspired by the contest “Personify A Tear” by Wilma N. Neels 9th Place

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/26/2011 4:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Wilma. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/22/2011 2:18:00 PM

Warm congrats on your win with this most excellent poem! Great depth of emotion and beautifully written. Thank you so much also for your kind congrats, so sincerely appreciated. love, shar

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2011 12:09:00 PM

Great to see you in the winner's list, Wilma. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 4/22/2011 11:11:00 AM

Hi Wilma,Congrats on yet another win--kash

Jack Horne

Date: 4/22/2011 4:51:00 AM

Many congratulations and a very happy Easter to you : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/22/2011 4:36:00 AM

Congrats Wilma on your beautiful win in HG's contest on tears.. amazing words of emotion and tenderness my friend.. enjoy another well deserved top ten sweet success with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2011 4:32:00 AM

Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Wilma

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/21/2011 10:21:00 PM

Dear Wilma, Thank-YOU For Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations on YOUR 9th Place Win LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege...HG

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/21/2011 10:00:00 PM

Tears do help sometime. They melt that lump of hurt. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/21/2011 9:59:00 PM

Beautiful write Wilma. Many congrats, Have a blessed Easter.

James Fraser

Date: 4/18/2011 1:59:00 PM

Fine poetry once again Wilma. Another terrific read for us to enjoy from your pen....:) smiles

Kash Poet

Date: 4/2/2011 9:07:00 AM

Wonderful personification of a tear!Best wishes Wilma--kash

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/1/2011 3:07:00 PM

A heart felt write my dear Lady In the Sky.. A tear is as good as it is bad... Lovely write and a winner in my book..love to your always Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 9:30:00 AM

Simply touching and tender write Wilma my friend.. the journey of a tear ..so aptly presented full of emotion.. good luck in the contest luv and happy weekend too..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2011 1:51:00 PM

Excellent way to personify a tear, wilma. I think this one should do splendidly in the contest!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/31/2011 11:52:00 AM

You really did give life to this tear in your beautiful poem, Wilma. I think men tend to see tears as a sign of weakness, but I find it very moving when a man is strong enough to show emotion. Releasing the tears does "cleanse" us and helps alleviate some of the pain. Wishing you success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

James Foulk

Date: 3/31/2011 8:46:00 AM

a very creative poem and worded, enjoyed it.