Brian Strand Poet Alliteration

Our Hedonistic Lad

Glad,hedonistic lad;
Delighting in delectations,
Amusing affectations,
Posturing pretension
with ogling ostentation!

Professing pleasure seeking
Confessing,leisure leaning.
Reputation so revealing,
Passe peer appealing!

Performing,extroverting,
Showcasing,demonstrating,
Superficial and artificial;
Pleasure without measure.

Sad,sad,sad ! Hedonistic lad!

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Ernilando Tugaff March 13, 2010 at 1:11 PM Congratulations Brian on your featured poem this week. Ernilando

Tanika Cooks March 12, 2010 at 5:43 PM wow, that was amazing! a true pleasure to read...can't wait to read more of your work. nika

Constance La France March 12, 2010 at 6:57 AM Congratulations on being featured this week .. Constance

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 11, 2010 at 6:59 PM Congratulations, Brian, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann

Laura Mckenzie March 9, 2010 at 5:00 PM Brian~ Congratulations on your much deserved featured poem of the week! Laura :)

Carol Sunshine Brown March 8, 2010 at 9:47 AM Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Brian. Love, Carol

Daver Austin March 8, 2010 at 6:32 AM This guy you describe - is he, by chance, seated in some high place in Washington, D.C.? Congrats on this featured piece. Love, daver

Doris Culverhouse March 8, 2010 at 6:22 AM enjoyed, congrats on the featured poem!!

Janette Fisher March 8, 2010 at 4:38 AM Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 7, 2010 at 8:14 PM Congrats Brian on your featured poem on the Soup this week.. an excellent choice to share with us all..luv.. Linda-Marie..