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our hands touch

                            interlace

palm to palm

                      embrace

each other

                  they face

if they were lips they’d kiss

                        descend the staircase

our kingdom in

                         slow pace

and time, outside our realm

                                           erase

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Date: 8/20/2024 4:14:00 PM
Quite amazing, Kim! "Descend the staircase" what a metaphor <3
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Date: 6/21/2022 7:36:00 PM
Ooh! I love this. I can just feel it, line by line. Tingles up and down my spine. :) Electricity Crackles
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2022 4:59:00 AM
Yay! Have an electrifying day, my friend!
Date: 6/20/2022 10:20:00 PM
"Palms to palms embrace"! Intimacy at its best !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2022 4:59:00 AM
Yes! Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 6/20/2022 10:58:00 AM
Both lovely and interesting.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2022 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Ken!
Date: 6/20/2022 5:26:00 AM
Beautifully written, Kim:-) Love the format!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2022 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Edward!
Date: 6/20/2022 5:08:00 AM
Love this one dear Kim... kiss kissy! Love Happy Jack XOX
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2022 5:23:00 AM
Thanks so much Happy Jack!
Date: 6/20/2022 1:17:00 AM
Our realm is all we have in this world. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2022 5:23:00 AM
Hugs to you, dear friend!

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