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Our Greek Getaway

Dear friiends those who first read my poem i left an important line out in the donkey story The first dance after our wedding, Was absolutely exciting, intoxicating, My darling whispered in my ear, My wedding present to you is three weeks Touring Greece, the evening came to an end, We courteously said our thank yous and goodnight As every body teased us, and threw more rice. It was our wedding night, no more can I tell! First class no less, this was so great, I went to sleep exhausted and before I Knew it, we were landing at a hectic airport Athens, then transferring to Kerkira- Corfu How inviting the blue azure Mediterranean Sea Looked below, for sure we would go for a swim. Today, I couldn’t wait to submerge myself into That sparkling clear water. There is even a historic casino in Corfu. We traveled north, not only seaside destinations. Visited the Meteora, a formation of Of rocks many hundreds of steps To the top exhausting, and who lives there, Eastern orthodox Monks so devout , Rocks of thousands of Years old, The monastery, once entered, could not be left, So they would enter, after four years would take their vows And live and die there. If women arrived wearing Sundress in a tour, monks would hurriedly approach them and put a shawl over their shoulders. We traveled North passing villages. Where a woman ‘s husband on their wedding night Night, had to prove the next day his wife was a virgin, By hanging their wedding sheet outside their house. We visited the island of Idra or, Hydra, Where we saw an old man with a donkey, With a sign round the donkey’s neck Asking would you like a donkey ride. Up into the saddle the old man and hubby Helped me, hubby took photos of me on the donkey, Suddenly the donkey farted, we were traveling. Upwards, the smell intense ‘signome parakalo’ – Please accept my apology, said the old man My donkey, rarely does this, the next thing the Donkey dropped to its haunches, I grabbed him Around his neck and held on for dear life, as the Donkey pooed and farted his lungs out almost It ran down the street, some horrified, most screeched with laughter, It splashed onto onlookers, smeared me and smelt like sh..t! I was still holding onto the donkey’s neck, my Husband concerned how to get me off The donkey, there was only one option , so Stood ankle deep in this stinky poo , We both smelt bad, went back to hotel amid disgusted looks, But hey on honeymoon, so had a very long shower together. Four days left which we spent in the mecca of Tourism, Athens, we visited Plaka and an awesome Taverna where we danced to our hearts content till the Early hours of the morning, we visited the Parthenon which, In fact, was built about 440-BC on the Acropolis hill, A magnificent structure. Went sswimming and sunbathing at the Famous Glyfada beach, we visited Marathona more ancient ruins, With the best sunset I have ever seen, and then it was Time to leave. We boarded the aircraft at 8.00 pm the following night and arrived in Johannesburg Almost ten hours later at Johannesburg airport. Of course, I had done a lot of shopping and my Family were delighted with the gifts I brought back for them. Hubby and I went home, he carried me over the thresh hold, And how I loved it, a little old fashioned and that brings My story to an end, oh and we are living happily ever after For the rest of our lives. THE END.

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Date: 10/4/2023 6:52:00 AM
What a terrific story Jennifer! Certainly a fond and fun memory. Very cute! :)
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Date: 7/22/2023 2:49:00 AM
Jennifer Jennifer Jennifer. Good Morning. You are so skilled expressing your thoughts. Your words are so clear and vivid that we are all in the scene and story along with you and your characters. Truly. Coupled with that you always manage to create an entry that brings a smile to the reader. May the pen always be with you. May this day find you well. It was a pleasure turning to your page this morning. Blessings always (smile)
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Date: 7/18/2023 5:46:00 AM
Loved this Jennifer. Your great description took me there. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/17/2023 9:06:00 PM
How delightful to enjoy the land of your family heritage for your honeymoon with your sweetheart... another tale to add to your poetical autobiography in your wonderful and original storytelling style. You both must have been rather exhausted after three weeks of such adventure! Loved reading this - I hope you are doing well, my friend. Blessings and hugs ~ John
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Date: 7/16/2023 8:38:00 AM
Jennifer, what a beautiful start to married life, no wonder you are a contented wife. Love your story from start to finish, yet there’s more to come there’s no doubt about it. Blessing and hugs ~ Belle :)
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Date: 7/17/2023 5:27:00 AM
Hi Belle our priest when he married us said about love that the longer you live together it becomes like tresured mature wine. You drink it and behold each others wonders. Love and hugs my poetry sis.Jennifer
Date: 7/15/2023 4:19:00 PM
Thank you, my dear friend, Jennifer, for sharing your honeymoon story with us. It sound like an experience of a lifetime. The donkey part was quite scarry, but you moved on and had a beautiful trip. I'd love to visit Greece, but at my age, it's not likely, so thanks for the trip in my mind. Love and hugs, Bill
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Date: 7/17/2023 5:08:00 AM
There are more retired people living in Greece permanently on one of the islands than youngsters on holiday just mean a guest house and they have cheap one week tours . You'll love it no donkey ride though. Glad you enjoyed my .poem my Texan friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Date: 7/15/2023 9:52:00 AM
This is such a special story you shared! Wow, a very fun time! However, I may skip the Donkey ride after all that. Great one Jennifer. I hope you have a nice day :)
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Date: 7/16/2023 1:39:00 AM
Our planet and i think governments and the worlds population have started becoming concerned and aware a little too late . Glad you enjoyed the poem minus the donkey! Love and best wishes Jennifer
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Date: 7/16/2023 1:33:00 AM
Heidi you are such a darling. I love hearing from you hope tou are jeeping well. Climate change is going to ravage
Date: 7/15/2023 6:40:00 AM
awww, love this heartwarming write
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Date: 7/15/2023 8:53:00 AM
Hi Jack, thank you for an awesome comment. hope you are feeling well and that your temperatures won't soar too high. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 7/13/2023 10:03:00 AM
Aha a sweet happily ever after... How are you dear Jennifer..? I truly enjoyed your poem.. Thank you for always sharing great stuff with us. Blessings sister
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Date: 7/14/2023 10:35:00 AM
Hi Pagunda, how thrilled i was to see your awesome comment written with the warmth and sincerity that you always write with, so, so glad yo enjoyed my poem. I enjoy your poems because they are also so close to our every day life. When in High school our English teacher always said write an essay on a real life situation. Blessings my dear friend and love, Jennifer.
Date: 7/5/2023 2:15:00 PM
"OUR GREEK GETAWAY" sounds like you had way tooooo much fun. I really enjoyed your write/story. When is the movie coming out??? Hahah... Have a fun day.................
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Date: 7/12/2023 6:20:00 AM
Paula you are like a Shining star on a dark cloudy night. Thank you for your lovely comment. Blessings Jennifer

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