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Our Eyes Were Closed

life is the calm that everyone craves, we think we will sink, but it has its own waves it turns into chaos in a blink. was our meeting fate, or a beautiful mistake, my heart didn’t get that straight, or maybe it wasn’t awake. us meeting was elsyian, like soil meets the land, like a different adhesion, or a mistake well planned. we stood hand in hand, through life’s high’s and low’s although we were broken to stand, amidst all of this our eyes had to close

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Date: 10/7/2024 5:18:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/29/2021 4:52:00 PM
I loved the word play Adarsh, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Adarsh Tiwari
Date: 10/7/2024 5:40:00 AM
Thank You So Much!
Date: 7/29/2021 4:33:00 AM
Wonderful Word Play. Congratulations on your deserved win!
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Adarsh Tiwari
Date: 10/7/2024 5:40:00 AM
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Date: 7/29/2021 12:06:00 AM
Nicely done, Adarsh. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 10/7/2024 5:40:00 AM
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Date: 7/28/2021 3:49:00 PM
Adarsh, congratulations on your win.
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Adarsh Tiwari
Date: 10/7/2024 5:40:00 AM
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Date: 7/28/2021 2:55:00 PM
Hey! Congratulations for your winning place in the Word Play Poems, Play-on-Words, Contest. Well Done. I loved your poem and really enjoyed reading it.I hope you enjoyed the writing challenge. Great fun indeed! Cheers and Best Wishes!
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Date: 10/7/2024 5:40:00 AM
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