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Our Dance

The floating lights adds to the mood, he takes my hand while leading me to the dance floor his touch so tender makes me feel like I am floating on a cloud, as he gently move his hand over my bare back so protective and caring the soft music in the background creates the perfect ambiance, as we glide across the dance floor the other couples seems to fade away it is just the two of us, in a love dance of our own, a dance of commitment… He pulls me closer and whisper in my ear “You look breathtaking tonight” cheek to cheek, we dance the night away…

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Date: 9/9/2010 5:45:00 PM
Hey, how did I ever miss THIS one. It's just wonderful, Wilma! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/6/2010 9:26:00 PM
You have created such a lovely picture withthis poem. Loved it . Thanks for the comments dear Wilma.
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Date: 9/6/2010 12:46:00 AM
Very intimate writing Wilma,full of emotion.Especially like the intro.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/5/2010 9:57:00 AM
Oh, what a thrill to hear those words he whispered in your ear, Wilma. This must have been a special night for you. So beautifully written -- thanks for sharing. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/5/2010 8:36:00 AM
Love the picture. Love, Dave
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Date: 9/5/2010 6:26:00 AM
Thank you for reminding me of those romantic moments in life, as you depict here, ones that forever are vivid and wonderful to reflect on ! Have a fantastic Sunday ! james
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Date: 9/5/2010 6:11:00 AM
I'm running to the dance floor as we speak!!! wow , beautiful write... you are breathtaking just like your poetry....luv Michael
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Date: 9/5/2010 6:09:00 AM
MMMMmmmmm, romantic Wilma. Why don't you write love stories? you have the gentle touch
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Date: 9/4/2010 11:52:00 PM
What a very romantic write this is Ms. Neels! sure seemed like you danced the night away into the sunrise... how's you Sunday?? :) hugs to you-- nikko :)
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Date: 9/4/2010 7:39:00 PM
sounds romantic to me...have not gone dancing in a long time. My honey is not much of a dancer.
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Date: 9/4/2010 12:24:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this one that reads like winners' circle to me..I truly enjoyed your expressive and romantic write..I am so blessed to have you read and comment on my work faithfully...Sara
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Date: 9/4/2010 11:59:00 AM
Oo I want the next dance, pretty please. Lovely sweet poetry Wilma. Thank you for your always kind comments, have a Souper Douper Sunday >> James
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Date: 9/4/2010 10:17:00 AM
WEEEEEEEEEEE! enjoyed Wilma, what a delight poem to read this morning. The poem leads to a very good dance in my imagination,..p.d.
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