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Your closet was ajar i took a peek inside you haven't been here for awhile it's filled with jagged things deep from the complexities of mind dark horses stomping foul thoughts things concieved but never born old holiday bulbs of regret burned out over time yellow paper clippings from little victories under an avalanche of filthy things sprinkled with childhood themes fairy tales and rusty bike bells ice cream truck melodies your closet is a vertical casket a time trap for dead and dying dreams, it looks a lot like mine.

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Date: 2/25/2019 12:24:00 PM
Hi Anthony..you amaze me! Have no idea how you mix things together to create a perfect poetry cake! Panagiota
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Date: 2/21/2019 12:19:00 AM
I am so glad you ended this on such a "unified" note. It made the poem fun!
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Date: 2/20/2019 9:10:00 PM
o my we are on the same page today! "a time trap for dead and dying dreams"--poetry.
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