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Our Climate Changed

Our climate changed, froze our bond deranged. Ailing, you cried; choking, you prayed - BUT then you stayed! Now, ailing, I cry; choking, I pray: Please go away, say good-bye - GO - so all my sunshine won't die. ... CayCay February 9, 2017

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/17/2019 2:23:00 AM

You are a true inspiration CayCay - awesome write - love, love it! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2019 7:31:00 PM

I like how you did it metaphorically, sweetie. I hope she does not mind if it is not literal! I reread it, and i think i know what it's about!! Will have to ask you somewhere else if I got it right.

Silent One

Date: 2/10/2019 8:19:00 AM

Ooh, I like Mo will love this one... love how the opening line is a metaphor for the rest of the poem...

Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/10/2019 10:08:00 AM

Hey, Mr. Man - I am so happy to have your enthusiastic comments, I feel blessed! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/10/2019 6:55:00 AM

Hi Cay Cay, love the content of this write. I love the creative way you have written this piece. I looked at the piece in both human and nature ways. Whatever way I looked at the piece I liked what I did read. Wishing you all the best for the contest. hugs....Mike. XX

Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/10/2019 10:08:00 AM

I hope all is golden in your world today - and always. Love your comments as I do your poetry. Thank you so much. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/10/2019 2:50:00 AM

Sometimes people don't take the hint Well written CayCay. Good luck. Tom.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/10/2019 10:10:00 AM

our presence is so uplifting to everyone at Soup, Tom - you are gift to us all. Thank you for commenting! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Bobby May

Date: 2/9/2019 5:11:00 PM

This is really good CayCay, want to trade?

Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/10/2019 10:11:00 AM

I've slept since yesterday, Bobby, but, if I remember correctly, you are asking me if I want a pit in my pants? If it's all the same to you, I'm good!, and I'm grinning again. So good to read your 'cute' comment, loved it! Poetry hugs ... CayCay