Oskar & Alma

The only child they had- was their game of love See the painting' The Tempest' which encapsulates Oskar's love for Alma

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/12/2010 10:09:00 AM

When I first read the title I thought it was OKRA...I wrote a couple on okra...LOL Well done.

Constance La France

Date: 7/10/2010 6:48:00 AM

I think this poem is wonderful. I received my prize yesterday, your collection of Couplets, called Copula, and it is truly wonderful, and it has moved me, to write a cyrstalline with a kyrielle theme , my inspiration is your poem, That Day, and my poem is called, Engraved In Stone . . .

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2010 8:20:00 AM

Awesome write Brian.. perfect for your footnote.. enjoyed.. with luv..