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delicately folded lines... a song within her mind... in a room of muted paper and bamboo lattice silence she softly closes the shoji door to find a place of freedom With legs crossed upon the tightly woven tatami she sits in an imaginary world beyond the twilight canopy she floats through stardust light she folds an empty paper... a dream of endless flight... _____________________________ Contest ~ "Anything Handmade" Poet ~ Rick Parise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/8/2011 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Anything Homemade"contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:06:00 PM
This is elegant and beautiful. Wonderful poetry for origami. Congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 6/7/2011 3:38:00 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2011 1:48:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your wonderful win in nette's contest with this fine piece of poetry. gautami
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Date: 6/6/2011 11:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win in nette's contest
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:03:00 AM
Congrats Rick on another grand win in Nette's contest with this fantastic creation in poetry my friend.. enjoy with luv...excellent as usual..
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Date: 6/5/2011 2:57:00 PM
oh wow, nobody has commented on this amazing write? I just love this one, Rick-- I hope this places high! I love how you made this sound so delicate, and very intricately written, will add this to my faves-- lovely, lovely write, Rick! & thank you as well for my placement in your monoku contest :D
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