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Orgasmic Oceans Outlive Co-Write With Darren White

"Orgasmic Oceans Outlive" Open skies, where early morning sun wakes... Rippling small waves hook the shore, Gladly playing with sun, pebbles and sand Along this world orgasmic senses breathe Sending each guest higher and higher Making this wonderment like no other Innate flight up, up and higher still Canto in C, wild and passionate Only sun and moon know where to be Capturing silhouettes of reflective light Engaging all to be part of this world Arched in this fluorescence whales sing their love Near each other, nuzzling in wintry water Slowly engaging, with carnal coyness Onwardly waltzing upon diamond rocks Ultimately embracing all that is rapture Taking hold of love light and glory Living within this open dream existence I wish never to awake or leave Vessels in the distance swim between dolphins, Each will carry us to dreamlike destinations co written by SkyWatcher and Darren White 05-07-17 note to Darren Darren you have no idea what this entry means to me and the worth of working together with you and sharing words. And yes sharing words of the ocean. How grand is that. Very. It was an honor and privilege. Thank you Darren. Excuse me. Thank you Penguin.

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/6/2017 2:16:00 PM

Fantastic collab, Lisa and Darren. Love the last three lines of this beautiful poem. Very romantic and dreamy. Hard to pull off in the Acrostic form, but you two did an excellent job. Bravo. A aesthetically pleasing poem to the senses. Love always.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/7/2017 6:11:00 AM

Good Morning Freddie. Thank you very much. It was wonderful working with Darren. We both love the ocean. I'm pleased you liked the entry. Please know your generosity is never taken lightly by me. Honestly. Thank you very much for all your continued support and offerings. Have a wonderful morning. I will see you on your page.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/10/2017 3:54:00 AM

Oh what a wonderful write together Bravo, I really enjoyed that Darren and Lisa. Super 7++

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2017 5:39:00 AM

Good Morning Maria. Hi. on behalf on Darren and I, Thank you Thank you. I'm pleased you enjoyed the entry and that it has been seen. Always do I appreciate your generosity Maria. Have a wonderful morning and I will see you on your page.

Miraj Raha

Date: 5/8/2017 11:03:00 AM

Oh this is so alive with colorful images,brimming with beauty and love .brilliant work both of you.

Darren White
Date: 5/8/2017 2:49:00 PM

Miraj, thank you so much, I am happy you loved it.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/8/2017 1:47:00 PM

Hello Miraj. It is your review and words that are alive to me. On behalf of myself and Darren thank you very much. Never do I take generosity lightly. I'm pleased you liked the entry. It was an honor working with Darren on this. Have a wonderful night. I will see you on your page.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/8/2017 10:29:00 AM

I hope you two join again forces for another fascinating journey where we swim along loving whales on to the great beyond. By the way, I didn't realize at all it was an acrostic until I read Tim's comments. Thank you for sharing your gift my friends:) Amitiés

Darren White
Date: 5/8/2017 2:47:00 PM

Merci beaucoup Anne-Marie, it was a very subtle acrostic, wasn't it? :) I love working with Lisa, it was a veru smooth collaboration. And I loved the similar way we worked, it just clcks perfectly.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/8/2017 1:44:00 PM

Hi Anne-Marie. Good Afternoon. It is I who thank you and yes Darren thanks you too for this truly generous and wonderful review and commentary. It was such an honor working with words and the ocean with Darren. Thank you also Anne-Marie for mentioning the Acrostic. Have a wonderful afternoon and I will see you on your page. Amities back to you thank you.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/8/2017 8:05:00 AM

Wow simply beautiful my friends and the fact that I didn't know it was an acrostic until after I read shows how talented the two of you are...a fav

Darren White
Date: 5/8/2017 9:41:00 AM

Wow, thanks Tim :) Yeah, it's a sneaky acrostic, isn't it? We tried to make the poem as natural as can be, and seeing your comment, we succeeded.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/8/2017 8:24:00 AM

Good Morning Tim. As I've stated to everyone. On behalf of our friend Darren. Thank you ever so much. Words can not express my thoughts of such praise. Honestly. It is Darren who is the talented one. And yes you as well for you are. I'm certain Darren will be thrilled you have found this and seen it. And yes again, so am I. Have a wonderful morning and day Tim.

Anil Deo

Date: 5/8/2017 6:48:00 AM

Shalom, shalom and congrats Darren & Lisa. I am just getting to know Darren, who is kind to newcomers to PS. But new "orgasms" worried me, since I am married. I overcame fear of smut because I somehow felt Lisa would be "divine" with every subject. You did not disappoint yet. Blessings - may your entry go where the LORD plans. amen

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/8/2017 6:56:00 AM

Good Morning Anil. Thank you very much. This entry is for the love of the ocean and all her wonder and being with purity attached. Honestly. Thank you as always for gracing entries with such intake and commentary not to mention generosity. Have a wonderful morning and day. And yes Shalom back to you always.

Chris Green

Date: 5/8/2017 5:51:00 AM

What an amazing collaboration between two of my favorite poets. This is like buy one, get one free. :) You have taken the majestic shoreline and brought it into perfect poetic focus here. The love both of you have for the sea really glows in this wonderful work. Bravo to both of you

Darren White
Date: 5/8/2017 6:06:00 AM

On behalf of Lisa I say thank you Chris :) and yeah, what she says: I am glad you found our poem, and I hope you had a great weekend!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/8/2017 5:57:00 AM

Oh Chris. Good Morning. I hope your weekend went well. On behalf of our friend Darren. Thank you Thank you. Honestly. You so have me smiling with the buy one get one free (lol) Please know your words reviews and time are not taken lightly. I'm most certain Darren will be thrilled to know you have found and seen this. Bravo back to you. Enjoy the morning and I will see you on your amazing page.

White Wolf

Date: 5/8/2017 5:06:00 AM

Excellent collab guys! A real enjoyment to read!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/8/2017 5:12:00 AM

Good Evening White Wolf. On behalf of Darren and I. Thank you Thank you. Honestly. Darren is such a talent and beyond as are you. What better than the ocean is there. Have a wonderful night and thank you again White Wolf.

Darren White

Date: 5/8/2017 5:03:00 AM

Lisa SkyWatcher, it was a pleasure and an honour to write this together. I enjoyed every minute of it. We wrote a poem acros(tic) the ocean we both love so much :) I think the poem is beautiful, and I like it sooooooo much. This little penguin hopes the SkyWatcher will want to write another poem with him some day!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/8/2017 6:02:00 AM

Yes, I know. I'm sorry Darren. There I go again...

Darren White
Date: 5/8/2017 5:45:00 AM

I wouldn't call something big that hits my eye "amore" LOL ;)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/8/2017 5:38:00 AM

Oh Penguin. I forgot to say and recite "when the moon hits your eye like a big piece of pie that's amore..." (lol)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/8/2017 5:19:00 AM

Top of the Afternoon Mr. Darren. It is I who am honored. Honestly. This was a gift Darren. Name the time and place and I will be there ready with the keyboard to type words. Thank you sincerely and from the heart. Now Penguin behave and stay well please. -- smile --

Probir Gupta

Date: 5/8/2017 5:00:00 AM

Great poem from a rich collaboration ... Enjoyed reading it ... and dream for 'dreamlike destination' ...

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/8/2017 5:10:00 AM

Good Morning Probir. So nice to see you. Thank you ever so much. What generosity. I'm pleased you liked this and that this entry has been seen and graced. Darren White is amazing. Have a wonderful day.