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Oregon Coast Vacation

Oregon Coast Vacation My heart yearns for a place of peaceful desire A place where the impulse of adventure will entice Florence, Newport, and Yachats Oregon Coast where the tall pine grow Where rivers and ocean are turquoise gradient of paradise A place where the impulse of adventure will entice Camping, hiking, dune riding, and sightseeing bringing you back to childhood Where rivers and ocean are turquoise gradient of paradise The gentle swells of the waves rise and fall; smells of brine and wet-wood Camping, hiking, dune riding, and sightseeing bringing you back to childhood Cool twilight of the day fades drawing shadows obscured by trees The gentle swells of the waves rise and fall; smells of brine and wet-wood A lovely quiet haven for elk, deer, bear, owls, pelicans, and sea lions Cool twilight of the day fades drawing shadows obscured by trees As we gaze up towards the universe twilight; kisses settling in with tranquility A lovely quiet haven for elk, deer, bear, owls, pelicans, and sea lions Could not deny ourselves the intervention with nature’s beauty As we gaze up towards the universe twilight; kisses settling in with tranquility Florence, Newport, and Yachats Oregon Coast where the tall pine grow Could not deny ourselves the intervention with nature’s beauty My heart yearns for a place of peaceful desire 2/17/2016
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Duggan Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Wow Eve, that looks and sounds like a wonderful and beautiful place to visit, If I were younger I would seriously think about it, what a lovely read, you certainly have painted beautiful picture, hope you are well, take care my dear friend.........Vera
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Deer and other critters!!!!!
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Vera, I think you and Peter would love it. I lived in a small town called Sutherlin with mountains all around the dear and other critters would come and visit. My husband and boys loved the hunting and fishing!!! We are doing great hubby had his last treatment Monday.he is still weak ,but he will be OK. Hope you both are doing well!
Tagore Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Wonderful! The place and your vivid presentation in Pantoum form. Hugs, Bobby
A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 11:07 PM
Any time, Eve
A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 9:39 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your awesome "Vacation WIN!" LINDA
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 11:02 PM
Thank you so much :-) Hugs Eve
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Vacations varied/ vacations great all who won are on the winners’ page..Congrats..Sara
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations :)
Scars Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Eve, I love the rhyme scheme, and a wonderful poem...Congrats in your placement :)-luloo *smiles*
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations :)
Rycroft Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Congrats well done x a beautiful poem well written xxxxx Wendy
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations :)
May Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 7:28 AM
Great write and win Eve...Congrats
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations :)
Lane Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 6:15 AM
It truly is a beautiful coast city. Congratulations for placing with your scenic views of Oregon, Eve. Thanks for writing for my contest.
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Thank you so much Lin, for placing my poem!!! I miss Oregon and its tranquil beauty :)
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 1:31 PM
Gosh another place to add to my today list:-) good luck in the contest Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 5:54 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. l know you would love it :)
Gorelick Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 2:56 PM
LIved in Oregon and loved it.the Oregon cost is gorgeous. Love your poem and the memories. BG
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Awe!!!! Thank you, Barbara, I lived there for over 30 years and loved the drive down the curvy road following the river to the coast and stopping by Scottsburg by a farmer's field and see all the elk laying in the field.
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February 18, 2016 at 4:02 AM
how picturesque, eve... i will include Oregon on my list, so well done!.. huggs
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Thank you so very much, Nette, Oregon is such a beautiful place! Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:35 PM
Sounds fantastic Eve. I wish to visit sometime.
Roper Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:51 PM
Tim, if you love nature, the ocean, and tranquility you would love it.
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