Ordinary Words

Many people like poems written with ordinary words. 
Some that jestfully tell about life in ordinary ways,
even though life is far from ordinary,
They want poems that lighten their days.

Enough with the highfalutin language, they say.
Start writing words common folks understand.
Bring back the use of everyday words.
Oh, you want idioms (words that are canned).

I love the feel of the silken poetic words,
that tickle the ears and whisper to the soul.
they wrap your thoughts in gossamer silk,
both pleasant and bitter their goal.

Writing poetry is a road strewn with boulders.
Life wrings itself out upon our pages.
Where there's beauty, we're often drawn to the dark
found hiding behind it on various stages.

We find ourselves writing about love that threatens,
or long ago left, storming out the door, kicking aside
hope like pebbles. Or, crawling out with a whimper and
a fearful glance, then running: words we cannot hide...
ordinary words.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Horsman Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 9:38 PM
Awesome poetry is this, Ann, i couldn't agree more with every word..Love the third stanza..Harry
Peck Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 10:00 AM
Thank you, Harry. Ordinary words often carry a lot of weight. Thanks for liking that stanza :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 7:47 PM
I like the fanciful, flowery poetic words. They smooth my soul. However, my poems thrive using ordinary words, so thank you for this poem, Ann.
Peck Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 7:51 AM
And I love your ordinary words, Caren. They go straight to the heart.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 7:30 PM
"I love the feel of the silken poetic words, that tickle the ears and whisper to the soul. they wrap your thoughts in gossamer silk, both pleasant and bitter their goal." Love this stanza, Ann. You are wonderful with rhyming! Wish I had that talent! Many thanks for visiting my page. BW ~ Mala
Peck Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 7:53 AM
Thank you, Mala, for commenting. I've made your page one of my favorites.
Pettit Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 4:08 PM
Nicely written with some good rhyming.
Peck Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 5:57 PM
Thanks, Robert. It's an old poem that took me all day to rewrite. :)
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