Ordinary Orange

Growing up in the colorful land 
of rich fruits ripened by sunshine,
I waited for the harvest time...
imagining how sweet they tasted.

I carried a basket made of strong wick,
it could hold forty oranges or more,
farmers left them on trees for anyone
who loved to pick them after work.

The orange grove was on the outskirts
of the town with three church towers
and lovely hills bubbling with brooks;
there I sat and ate my tasty oranges.  

Around six o' clock, the carroty sun 
dropped below the darkening horizon
giving a goodbye kiss to the oranges
not happy to be hidden in darkness.

Until the last day of Fall I picked oranges,
I gave some away to neighbors who smiled;
grandma loved them as in her youth days...  
she remembered the orange grove and cried.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 14, 2016 at 11:42 PM
Andrew, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Delightful freshly picked oranges..This orange is a winner..Congrats..Sara
Kimathi Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 6:03 AM
Greetings Andrew. Congrats for your WIN, with this interesting verse!!! ;-)
Raven Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 7:01 PM
Hi Andrew, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I enjoyed the read....Vlad.
Negron Flores Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Andrew
Hicks Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 2:34 PM
I've never seen an orange tree before ... it sounds like a delight. I enjoyed the down-home feel of this poem ... warmly inviting.
Gorelick Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 1:28 PM
Now this I like! Congrats...Grandma would have been proud. BG
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 11:49 AM
Congratulations, nice work...
Milliner Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Great write Andrew!! Congratulations on you win!
Scars Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Andrew, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:04 AM
- Andrew, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
Simpson Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Andrew this sounds more like 'a narrative' or 'an ode to oranges".....Congrats on your win, very good!
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