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Ordinary Orange

Growing up in the colorful land of rich fruits ripened by sunshine, I waited for the harvest time... imagining how sweet they tasted. I carried a basket made of strong wick, it could hold forty oranges or more, farmers left them on trees for anyone who loved to pick them after work. The orange grove was on the outskirts of the town with three church towers and lovely hills bubbling with brooks; there I sat and ate my tasty oranges. Around six o' clock, the carroty sun dropped below the darkening horizon giving a goodbye kiss to the oranges not happy to be hidden in darkness. Until the last day of Fall I picked oranges, I gave some away to neighbors who smiled; grandma loved them as in her youth days... she remembered the orange grove and cried.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/14/2016 11:42:00 PM
Andrew, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/7/2016 10:13:00 AM
Delightful freshly picked oranges..This orange is a winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2016 6:03:00 AM
Greetings Andrew. Congrats for your WIN, with this interesting verse!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/6/2016 7:01:00 PM
Hi Andrew, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I enjoyed the read....Vlad.
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Date: 3/6/2016 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Andrew
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Date: 3/6/2016 2:34:00 PM
I've never seen an orange tree before ... it sounds like a delight. I enjoyed the down-home feel of this poem ... warmly inviting.
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Date: 3/6/2016 1:28:00 PM
Now this I like! Congrats...Grandma would have been proud. BG
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Date: 3/6/2016 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations, nice work...
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Date: 3/6/2016 11:07:00 AM
Great write Andrew!! Congratulations on you win!
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Date: 3/6/2016 9:57:00 AM
Andrew, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/6/2016 9:04:00 AM
- Andrew, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
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Date: 3/6/2016 9:00:00 AM
Andrew this sounds more like 'a narrative' or 'an ode to oranges".....Congrats on your win, very good!
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